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March 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Things are getting better and better. Well, not then part where Goten is risking his life to kill 18. But the part where he accidently mated with Trunks was cool. I thought that was whappenppened at the end of the last chapter. I mean but we all saw that coming from a mile away.
I decided to wait patiently to find out what happened in the cave. But if this story ends and I still don\'t know...Let\'s just say I will be a tad irritated. Just kidding I know that you have your reasons. Oh...I see a new ficy. *does excited dance...aka The Dance of A Thousand Idiots* Bye!
I decided to wait patiently to find out what happened in the cave. But if this story ends and I still don\'t know...Let\'s just say I will be a tad irritated. Just kidding I know that you have your reasons. Oh...I see a new ficy. *does excited dance...aka The Dance of A Thousand Idiots* Bye!
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March 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, loved this chapter...definitely glad I read this after the sadder ones :-)
Loved the scenes where Vegeta tells Goten to test out if he truly is mated with Trunks. Loved the little trip down memory lane this provided me :-)
Isn\'t Goten a spoilsport then? Vegeta was planning on having so much fun too. LOL!
\"“You don’t have to listen to Geta,” he said. And Trunks stopped hopping.\"
\"Hours of amusement were just lost.\" LOL!
My favourite part though, was the same scenes from Trunks\' perspective. I loved his baffled attempts to understand the twins, but most of all, I loved how he was adamant in his own mind that he wasn\'t going to touch his nose or hop on one leg and then his amazed annoyance at doing just those things:
\"Now Trunks that was the stupid thing he had ever heard and he certainly was… Well, he apparently was going to do it, because his finger was on his nose. Why?\"
\"Trunks thought vindictively that he was definitely not going to do… Dammit!\"
LOL! Funny stuff!
Something has just occurred to me - somewhat belatedly I know - but, does Trunks know who the twins parents are? I would have thought that their looks and Vegeta\'s name would be a give away - not to mention that they are obviously Saiyan, but he doesn\'t act like he knows...s\'m \'m curious...does he?
Yes! About time the twins took out the androids...sad that Bulma and the little boy had to die before they did it though.
\"Didn’t really mind it that much, because Vegeta would catch him. Or Trunks. Someone. They always did.\"
Hmmm, this would explain why Goten is such a hot head, he has total faith in those close to him, which is nice...I wonder why Vegeta doesn\'t? I\'m getting more and more curious about that ice cave and it\'s link to why they can\'t return home.
\"Thought of his father and his mother. Of his baby brother.\"
Yeah! Vegeta and Goku had another baby :-)
An enjoyable chapter...and intriguing :-)
Looking forward to the nene. ne.
\"Please ignore my little grr. Moment.\"
Already done...I wasn\'t upset or anything...I actually felt bad, because you are always so prompt - lt llt like I was letting you down...so I\'m okay with your little grrr moment :-)
Loved the scenes where Vegeta tells Goten to test out if he truly is mated with Trunks. Loved the little trip down memory lane this provided me :-)
Isn\'t Goten a spoilsport then? Vegeta was planning on having so much fun too. LOL!
\"“You don’t have to listen to Geta,” he said. And Trunks stopped hopping.\"
\"Hours of amusement were just lost.\" LOL!
My favourite part though, was the same scenes from Trunks\' perspective. I loved his baffled attempts to understand the twins, but most of all, I loved how he was adamant in his own mind that he wasn\'t going to touch his nose or hop on one leg and then his amazed annoyance at doing just those things:
\"Now Trunks that was the stupid thing he had ever heard and he certainly was… Well, he apparently was going to do it, because his finger was on his nose. Why?\"
\"Trunks thought vindictively that he was definitely not going to do… Dammit!\"
LOL! Funny stuff!
Something has just occurred to me - somewhat belatedly I know - but, does Trunks know who the twins parents are? I would have thought that their looks and Vegeta\'s name would be a give away - not to mention that they are obviously Saiyan, but he doesn\'t act like he knows...s\'m \'m curious...does he?
Yes! About time the twins took out the androids...sad that Bulma and the little boy had to die before they did it though.
\"Didn’t really mind it that much, because Vegeta would catch him. Or Trunks. Someone. They always did.\"
Hmmm, this would explain why Goten is such a hot head, he has total faith in those close to him, which is nice...I wonder why Vegeta doesn\'t? I\'m getting more and more curious about that ice cave and it\'s link to why they can\'t return home.
\"Thought of his father and his mother. Of his baby brother.\"
Yeah! Vegeta and Goku had another baby :-)
An enjoyable chapter...and intriguing :-)
Looking forward to the nene. ne.
\"Please ignore my little grr. Moment.\"
Already done...I wasn\'t upset or anything...I actually felt bad, because you are always so prompt - lt llt like I was letting you down...so I\'m okay with your little grrr moment :-)
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March 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey!!!! I\'m back and better than ever...well sorta
great chapters! I was missinlot lot of action and a hell of a awesom fic! *shakes fist at flu*
“I know how old I’ll be if you keep up this pace.”--rofl, that\'s very cute.
What?” She sat straight up. “EXCUSE ME?!”
“You’re excused. Now be quiet or you’ll wake the kid up.”--ok thats just damn hilarious!
And wow the twins can bring each other back to life that is very awesome. I love that. I just hope they nevee ate at the same time. This was really good and I enjoyed it!
Hey please don\'t glare at me...
I really felt so blah yesterday! but I feel better now! I would never leave ya hanging I love your fics too much!
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great chapters! I was missinlot lot of action and a hell of a awesom fic! *shakes fist at flu*
“I know how old I’ll be if you keep up this pace.”--rofl, that\'s very cute.
What?” She sat straight up. “EXCUSE ME?!”
“You’re excused. Now be quiet or you’ll wake the kid up.”--ok thats just damn hilarious!
And wow the twins can bring each other back to life that is very awesome. I love that. I just hope they nevee ate at the same time. This was really good and I enjoyed it!
Hey please don\'t glare at me...
I really felt so blah yesterday! but I feel better now! I would never leave ya hanging I love your fics too much!
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March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes, Trunks got did! Thand, hd, he is one of my favorites but sometimes he can be such a downer.
I can\'t believe folks aren\'t reviewing, but hey it happens to everyone. Even me.
I particularly enjoyed the part when Vegeta told Bulma that the boys were upstairs fucking. I don\'t think my mom would have been so surprised though. I come from a home of extreme easy goers. I guess that\'s why I\'m so mellow. Anyway, great chapter.
I can\'t believe folks aren\'t reviewing, but hey it happens to everyone. Even me.
I particularly enjoyed the part when Vegeta told Bulma that the boys were upstairs fucking. I don\'t think my mom would have been so surprised though. I come from a home of extreme easy goers. I guess that\'s why I\'m so mellow. Anyway, great chapter.
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March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Review for Chapter 7
Well things can certainly get intense with the twins. I\'m curious as to what the big problem is with Goten using that device on 17, but Vegeta certainly seems mighty pissed with him for doing so.
I love how Goten used a Kamehameha whilst Vegeta used a Gallic Gun. Had to chuckle over the fact that the twins then used the resulting ki to \'play\' catch...that\'s one ball you don\'t want to drop :-)
Why was Vegeta so annoyed at Trunks? Poor Trunks, he must wonde he he wouldn\'t be better off having the androids as house gueinstinstead. LOL!
“See?” he said, “I told you we could turn Super Saiyan.”
*Chuckle* That boy is way too cocky :-)
Interesting piece about \'the darkness\' and the fact that Vegeta seems to experience it more than most. Goten never seems to show this side at all...the fact that his \'mom\' sensed this in him enough to sympathise with him, and to explain about his own dark past is worrying...does this mean that Vegeta is a bit of a \'time bomb?\' It also makes me wonder if Goten\'s \'who gives a fuck\' philosophy may be his own unique way of dealing with his own dark nature...all this is very interesting stuff!
\"Mom and Dad had thought this was such a clever idea.\"
Indeed it was!
\"Aunt Bulma had been jealous because she hadn’t thought of it.\"
I\'ll bet she was. LOL!
Poor Vegeta, ealleally feels things deep doesn\'t he? I wonder if Goten fully realises just what his careless attitude is doing to his brother?
\"Or the time they had reprogrammed the Dragon Ball finder to find their parents. That had been fucking hilarious, because Krillid Pid Piccolo had tried to find the Dragon Balls and they kept finding their parents in compromising situations.\"
Oh God...ROTFL! Gods, I love those twins! LOL!
Poor Trunks...he must be so confused...now Vegeta is shoving him in Goten\'s direction...gotta admit, that\'s confused me too...I think I might have missed something...we\'ll see...another chapter ahead of me yet :-)
\"And everyone else wants to know what happened in the cave too! Yeah! (I want to know too.)\" LOL! Well that\'s reassuring :-)
Well things can certainly get intense with the twins. I\'m curious as to what the big problem is with Goten using that device on 17, but Vegeta certainly seems mighty pissed with him for doing so.
I love how Goten used a Kamehameha whilst Vegeta used a Gallic Gun. Had to chuckle over the fact that the twins then used the resulting ki to \'play\' catch...that\'s one ball you don\'t want to drop :-)
Why was Vegeta so annoyed at Trunks? Poor Trunks, he must wonde he he wouldn\'t be better off having the androids as house gueinstinstead. LOL!
“See?” he said, “I told you we could turn Super Saiyan.”
*Chuckle* That boy is way too cocky :-)
Interesting piece about \'the darkness\' and the fact that Vegeta seems to experience it more than most. Goten never seems to show this side at all...the fact that his \'mom\' sensed this in him enough to sympathise with him, and to explain about his own dark past is worrying...does this mean that Vegeta is a bit of a \'time bomb?\' It also makes me wonder if Goten\'s \'who gives a fuck\' philosophy may be his own unique way of dealing with his own dark nature...all this is very interesting stuff!
\"Mom and Dad had thought this was such a clever idea.\"
Indeed it was!
\"Aunt Bulma had been jealous because she hadn’t thought of it.\"
I\'ll bet she was. LOL!
Poor Vegeta, ealleally feels things deep doesn\'t he? I wonder if Goten fully realises just what his careless attitude is doing to his brother?
\"Or the time they had reprogrammed the Dragon Ball finder to find their parents. That had been fucking hilarious, because Krillid Pid Piccolo had tried to find the Dragon Balls and they kept finding their parents in compromising situations.\"
Oh God...ROTFL! Gods, I love those twins! LOL!
Poor Trunks...he must be so confused...now Vegeta is shoving him in Goten\'s direction...gotta admit, that\'s confused me too...I think I might have missed something...we\'ll see...another chapter ahead of me yet :-)
\"And everyone else wants to know what happened in the cave too! Yeah! (I want to know too.)\" LOL! Well that\'s reassuring :-)
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March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Review for Chapter 8
Okay, the twin bond has been explained a bit more...they can actually bring each other back from the dead with the surviving one\'s ki? hat hat because it\'s identical? A sort of advanced form of artificial respiration? Cool!
\"Thought that perhaps Vegeta had been right all along and fucking him was a horrible idea.\" LOL!
“I know how old I’ll be if you keep up this pace.”
LOL! Shades of his old man there :-)
Loved the bit about the sarcastic contest and Vegeta\'s first borns being like him...and Goten being amazed that he was even conceived if this attitude is what his dad had to put up with. LOL! Ah, Goten as you\'re no doubt about to find out...the sexy, sultry mate is worth the attitude ;-)
Hey, did Goten just claim Trunks?
Okay, now I know why Vegeta shoved Trunks back upstairs to his brother...he was protecting him. Vegeta seems to have a high priority in protecting his twin, although this is of course natural, Vegeta seems more obsessed than most...I wonder if it has anything to do with the ice cave incident or if it\'s just Vegeta being who he is?
I love how Vegeta\'s thoughts give us some insight into his relationship with his mother...they seem to be very closI liI like that :-)
“What?” She sat straight up. “EXCUSE ME?!”
“You’re excused. Now be quiet or you’ll wake the kid up.”
LOL! Not the most tactful of people is he?
*glares all the folk that did not review. *
Yeah, sorry about that, but I\'ve hardly been home in the last two days, I can assure you that I was not ignoring your wonderful work...just didn\'t get the chance to read anything let alone review...but I\'ve posted a review for each chapter...you know I love your stuff :-)
Okay, the twin bond has been explained a bit more...they can actually bring each other back from the dead with the surviving one\'s ki? hat hat because it\'s identical? A sort of advanced form of artificial respiration? Cool!
\"Thought that perhaps Vegeta had been right all along and fucking him was a horrible idea.\" LOL!
“I know how old I’ll be if you keep up this pace.”
LOL! Shades of his old man there :-)
Loved the bit about the sarcastic contest and Vegeta\'s first borns being like him...and Goten being amazed that he was even conceived if this attitude is what his dad had to put up with. LOL! Ah, Goten as you\'re no doubt about to find out...the sexy, sultry mate is worth the attitude ;-)
Hey, did Goten just claim Trunks?
Okay, now I know why Vegeta shoved Trunks back upstairs to his brother...he was protecting him. Vegeta seems to have a high priority in protecting his twin, although this is of course natural, Vegeta seems more obsessed than most...I wonder if it has anything to do with the ice cave incident or if it\'s just Vegeta being who he is?
I love how Vegeta\'s thoughts give us some insight into his relationship with his mother...they seem to be very closI liI like that :-)
“What?” She sat straight up. “EXCUSE ME?!”
“You’re excused. Now be quiet or you’ll wake the kid up.”
LOL! Not the most tactful of people is he?
*glares all the folk that did not review. *
Yeah, sorry about that, but I\'ve hardly been home in the last two days, I can assure you that I was not ignoring your wonderful work...just didn\'t get the chance to read anything let alone review...but I\'ve posted a review for each chapter...you know I love your stuff :-)
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March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
x_x I don\'t feel so good...I think my brother is giving me the flu...
anyway this was a great chap and very funny too!
Goten hopping like a rabbit and then his shirt...very cute and 17 ahhh I love him great fight scenes..
oh yeah and very interesting dream, I would love to know more about that. Like why Vegeta thought they died and wre broght back to like and stuff...interesting indeed.
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anyway this was a great chap and very funny too!
Goten hopping like a rabbit and then his shirt...very cute and 17 ahhh I love him great fight scenes..
oh yeah and very interesting dream, I would love to know more about that. Like why Vegeta thought they died and wre broght back to like and stuff...interesting indeed.
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March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That little gismo that Goten has is cool. I am getting more and more interested with those twins. Your story has some much going on. I love it. I like that I have to stay on my toes. I like being confused.
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March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whoo, Intense dream! Definitely want to know what that was all about! Now that the shared dream has restored their memory of this time, I can definitely understand Vegeta\'s need to go back and ask his parents about what happened in the ice cave...
The twins reactions upon waking was very well payedayed, right down to Vegeta feeling the need to brush off that, long ago, ice from his person.
Loved the whole rescuing the child scene and Trunks\' demand on why they left this time. The subtle sense of role reversal...\'a Vegeta\' leaving a fight to protect a child and Trunks demanding to go back and finish it...not even really acknowledging the child :-)
Vegeta and Goten seem to have the best of both their parents...love these two :-)
Loved how Vegeta \'introduced\' himself to 18 :-)
\"“Why aren’t you blond?” 17 asked Goten.\"
\"“Looks so good on him,” Goten said, pointing at Trunks.\"
LOL! I love nonchalant Goten :-)
Loved the whole, Goten facing off with android 17, scene...he was so Vegeta at this point :-)
I just don\'t get why he didn\'t finish him off though...but I absolutely loved the end dialogue. LOL!
Thanks for explainine bie biting scene...not as intriguing as I thought. LOL!
\"I think the first book Stephen king got published was Carrie.\"
Ah! Thanks. Actually haven\'t read that one. :-)
The twins reactions upon waking was very well payedayed, right down to Vegeta feeling the need to brush off that, long ago, ice from his person.
Loved the whole rescuing the child scene and Trunks\' demand on why they left this time. The subtle sense of role reversal...\'a Vegeta\' leaving a fight to protect a child and Trunks demanding to go back and finish it...not even really acknowledging the child :-)
Vegeta and Goten seem to have the best of both their parents...love these two :-)
Loved how Vegeta \'introduced\' himself to 18 :-)
\"“Why aren’t you blond?” 17 asked Goten.\"
\"“Looks so good on him,” Goten said, pointing at Trunks.\"
LOL! I love nonchalant Goten :-)
Loved the whole, Goten facing off with android 17, scene...he was so Vegeta at this point :-)
I just don\'t get why he didn\'t finish him off though...but I absolutely loved the end dialogue. LOL!
Thanks for explainine bie biting scene...not as intriguing as I thought. LOL!
\"I think the first book Stephen king got published was Carrie.\"
Ah! Thanks. Actually haven\'t read that one. :-)
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March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I feel sorry for Vegeta...well sorta,
him having to deal with Trunks and Goten sex(er...non-sex, but very heavy petting) life and stuff like that, that\'s so not fair for him!
Not fair!!!! Trunks is taking away Vegeta\'s brother!!!!! *shakes fist at Trunks* NO!
I am a twin so I can relate to that!!!!
I love the bond between them, the fact they can touch their bite marks and the other one knows he is touching own own at the same time. So cute!
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him having to deal with Trunks and Goten sex(er...non-sex, but very heavy petting) life and stuff like that, that\'s so not fair for him!
Not fair!!!! Trunks is taking away Vegeta\'s brother!!!!! *shakes fist at Trunks* NO!
I am a twin so I can relate to that!!!!
I love the bond between them, the fact they can touch their bite marks and the other one knows he is touching own own at the same time. So cute!
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