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for Horny & Happy

by CardDragonBall

person ChibiKillJoy
schedule April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
^^ Feelings about spring-time have completely turned around...that is, if more naked Saiyajins come out and screw themselves silly in my backyard...hmph, all we get are mosquitoes and tornadoes. Didn\'t know whether to giggle or blush through all the, once more hot n steamy, flowery sex. I think the best part was Vegeta popping the head off that da I c I can see him distracted and glaring evilly at it as Goku does his thing.
Please never ever EVER stop writing. Ever ^^
-KillJoy
person Mechanical Butterfly
schedule April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww, that was cute

“Its when everyone gets real horny and happy.” --rofl that made me laugh....
I am glad Vegeta ended up thinking Spring might not be so bad...^.^
I do hope Trunks and Goten clean up that table as they promised!
Nice little spring fic!

^.*
-MB-
person Honeysuckle
schedule April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really liked it,
though I feel a little sorry,for that daisy Vegeta squashed.
person Getarian
schedule April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoyed this drabble.

I\'m with Vegeta on this one. I love little fluffy chicks, but I wouldn\'t want them crapping on my table either :-D

Loved the, \'pert orange Gerber\' scene, could picture Vegeta turning his head as he regained his bearings, only to find the thing \'staring\' at him...too cute :-)

Really enjoyed the ticklingne. ne. Hate being tickled myself, but Vegeta seems to secretly enjoy it :-)

\"Kakarot pushed his head through the neckline of Vegeta’s shirt, looked at him. “I think I would be very happy if my horniness paid off.” Ducked his head back into the shirt,...\"

Loved the playfulness in this scene :-)

And damn, what a wonderful lemon! Even with a restricted word count, you\'ve still got it! ...and, loved the bit with \"that stupid orange daisy smirking at him.\" Vegeta\'s action was all that I would expect from him. LOL!

Loved that kiss! Loved it all :-)
person Hecate18
schedule April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
“Hey,” he said, “See if they’ll eat the daisy.” – Um… O_o

‘Annoying cute birds. He hated birds.’ – I like that; they’re cute, but annoying.
Spring don’tcha love it, Sunny one minute ‘what a lovely day for my driving lesson!’ and the next its raining and hailing while I’m doing 50mph.

‘(thankful nobody else could see him wriggl– I – I want to see him wiggle! ^_^
Stupid Daisy, gets to see the show! *pouts*
Won’t be watching any more shows in the future… will it!

No one ever gives me reasons to like spring, not reasons like that! ^_^

person jaygoose
schedule April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Spring is fabulous isn\'t it. I love Geta/Goku lovefests. It is amazing how much you can get done in 999 words.

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