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AHHHHHHHH! YOU LEFT IT THERE!!!! AND I HAVE TO WAIT UNTIL THE 7TH OF JUNE TO GET REGULAR NET BACK!!!!! *ahem* to explain that, my spring classes are now over and i have to wait until june for my summer classes to start so i can use the net again. my stupid labtop doesnt have a cdrom drive so i ca get get net on it. grr...anyway...Presta and Gohan...never saw that one coming.

the veggie pic is the background for my stupid computer *kicks it despite it being at home and me at school*

*starts dealing cards out to Goten and Trunks* this is what we\'ve been doing until Presta gives the key back. we\'ve gone through poker, blackjack, gin, rummy, gin rummy, speed, war, go fish...pretty much any card game there is.

Well, you set up the great escape very well. As I said before, I was wondering how he had gotten out.

So, Presta\'s going to put that lemon to good use with Gohan, huh?

I think that you made up for the lack of lemons with the one that was in Sayian Enlightenment.

Whoa Super Saiyan 4. I had a feeling that what they had planned. Poor Celly. I don\'t even think there will be much of a fight anymore. Heh...heh. Oww, Presta and Gohan. I am so excited. That will probably be really wierd though. Poor Pan...Ha ha!

That part where lil\' Vegeta fights Freeza was great- the shoes bit, and especially the MWha Mwha I am a tyrant Mwha. I can imagine Freeza saying tha wel well, in the poorly dubbed, sounds like someone granny voice. As for Cell, just imagine Freeza, but make him loads smarter, and give him a creepy English accent (living in England, (Kent, which is even worse, for the love of God) I know creepy accents, and thats damn creepy.). However, he does look like a giant cockroach- maybe Goten should buy a can of Raid (bug killer)!

Hmm. I wonder how Goku got out of the cage. Maybe he got angry enough to go SS4 and Goten hadn\'t accounted for that.

Looking forward to more.

I believe I gave and evil grin that you ignored at some point and are ignoring again. *grins even more evilly* Try this one on!

Now on to impending Cell fighting...

I won\'t be too harsh. I have faith in your skills. I am a huge Cell fan though...so I might be a tad nit pickly but feel free to ignore me there. I can\'t say too much though. At first the only thing I had to go by was the game too. I have seen a few of the Cell episodes and have read all the fan fics I could find on my love (he\'s rivaling the Prince at this point *waits for everyone to stop gasping*) there are distrubingly not a lot of them ya know,but they are a great help. Because of this I am not an expert...yet. I will be ordering the whole Saga very so. *jumps around happily in antisipation* Ignore that.

but I am sure that you will do a good job. :)

(That was cute, but he was horny and cute was not what he was going for.) --LoL

Flickee rie ring on his finger. “This is that ki-repressing stuff isn’t it?”--is he wanting to hide his true power? Is he too powerful?

She would get Gohan there by force or something else.--hm...really and what might this something else be? hehe...

and he pulled his shoes on in mid-flight. Which was a pretty impressive talent in itself, considering how it took concentration to remain flying. --I\'m impressed. He\'s got my vote for most talented saiyajin in flight...well actually Goku\'s got my vote for that. He does many strange things while flying...at least in fanfics he has...

He just gave her a smirk. “You smell…that’s why.” --*gasp* is she going through her first heat?

end notes were funny!!!
And the letters in Videl\'s name spelling devil, well I read that at a website a very long time ago.

And oh no...Presta is being locked in a cage from where she can\'t get out and is possibly going through heat!
What will happen!?!?

^.*
-MB-

Mwah! Mwah! I\'m rantrant. Mwah! ROFL. I think that deminsion travel has given the icejin demensia. I guess he\'s cured now though. *looks at powdered Freza*

Okay, who can\'t resist this. How did Goku get out?

And what is going to happen now that the box is open. I know, I know, I will eventually find out by reading more of the story.


Oh, and about the children, they\'re sayians. I\'m certain that they would get over it.

Well Hello!!!! *jaw opens, hits the f, an, and tongue rolls halfway down the block* Um ga but um oh. Did not see that one comming.

-El-

It was very good of Presta to inform Gohan of his sayian fatherly duties. Somebody needed to. They may need all the hands they can get in this fight. I hope that it doesn\'t, but it might. *kerskers* Videl is the span of Satan. *voice comes out of no where* \"That\'s Mr. Satan to you.\"

It was nice to see that they all had the time to take for sex. I think that the Goten and Trunks lemon might have been more interesting. We\'ll never know, will we.

O.o What is Presta doing with their lemon?