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Oh, very evil. Stick Presta in a cage while she is going into cycle with Gohan. And everybody has to watch. AAAAAAAAAh.

It was a very cute baby lemon. I don\'t think that the guys should be complaining, when it could possibly be the last lemon that they get until the fight is over.

Goku was taking being caged very calmly. Everyone was taking it rather calmly. Did Goten drug them?

Uh, oh...what\'s up with smelly Presta. I hope Videl becomes so outraged that she divorces Gohan and he can get on with be a productive Saiyan citizen. *grins evilly* I will not be ignored!

Your father trained you even when your mother didn’t want you trained, so grow a pair and do the same.” Then she patted him on the shoulder all friendly like. --LoL Oh gosh, I just love Presta. But she does make a v ver very good point.

At this Presta snorted. “Your wife is the spawn of Satan.”
“The devil, satan, not Hercule,” Gohan said. But he was grinning none the less. --rofl!!! loved that! but videl is evil look at her name makes the word devil!!! she is evil!!! And evil ppl never want their half breed saiyajins to train for fear they will destroy the evilness!!!! ok, maybe not that extreme but she is evil none the less. ^_^

“But I figured it would be something along the lines ofllo llo son. Remember me? I’m your father.” He gave her a look. --Lmao!!!

kissed her face everywhere he could and then said—almost feverishly—“I love you.”--that is so sweet! I love that relationship and they want more kids yeah!
and damn it you didn\'t finish that lemon!

*gasp* Presta give Goku and Vegeta\'s lemon back right now!!!!!
Oh I have abused my comp on many occasions...and it still hates me. I even gave it a present!!!!
^.*
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I apologize.

Vegeta actually relaxed!

I figured that is what it took.

Yeah...you noticed that \'am\opagopage. Persceptive. Anywho, I can certainly sympathize with having an ass load of characters in one fic. But you\'re doing good. I hadn\'t even missed Gohan until someone mentioned him and I actually like the bastard in this one.

O_O!!!
The twins are going to be stronger than Goku!!!!! By the end of the week!
and sorry about not reviewing...but I am having major comp problems...and I know this review sucks but my comp hates me and kept not posting my other reviews.
Anyway I loved this chapter as always!

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Why were Gohan’s kids here anyway? Pan wasn’t even here today. ----- Good Questions.
But in the other world, Gohan killed him. “What about the demi?” he asked “Trunks is brushing up…” ----- *Elene just sighs, rolls her eyes and walks away; all the while shaking her head and mumbling.*
If it makes you feel better, you’re not the only author I’m doing this to. The other one was ignoring Goten.

Ouuh, Ideas! I\'ll go get the massage oil after I\'m done reading the rest of the stories.

Yes, I liked the oil seduction. I liked Presta\'s \"I am today,\" responce about who\'s the boss. Very interesting discriptions of the littles.

The killing and being killed thing sounds a little scary. I guess they\'ve done it before, but it really can\'t be all that pleasant.

*shrugs* what can i say, she just took it from me.

did you by any chance get the picture i emailed you???