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by CardDragonBall

person macha
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So, Goten had the kids checking for any design holes in his cage, huh? *screeches* Cliff hanger, aaaaaaaaaaaaaah. Uh, oh, sounds like things are going to turn serious.

Thanks for the map! I also like the dipictions! *so busy looking at map while walking falls off of cliff edge.*
person Mechanical Butterfly
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2

A set of sliding doors between them for when privacy was needed. --I didn\'t think that could last! ^.~

That child refused to identify itself, naturally, but said only that it was indeed a child of the twins.) --lmao I wonder why the child didn\'t want to reveal themselves. I am happy that they seem to be living for a very long time. I was worried for a moment there. I just love the connection between the twins.

why his brother was building a large cage (and Goten refused to elaborate on why that was,) --O_O I wonder why he is building a cage myself...strange...

And being the father of this family, he had always thought that this rule did not apply to him. --lmao!!!! I figured that rule would not apply to him.

As always delicious lemons!!!!

I totally love the lemons between Goten and Trunks!!!!


Gk: *looks at audience * Oh, hi! *notices audience looking at Vegeta * HEY! THAT’S MINE! *grabs Vegeta and carts him off *--ROFL!!!!!!!!!

^.*
-MB-
person Ginia
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love your lemons... *sigh* Anyway, about that cage - Silly Goten for not thinking about the larger gaps on the bottom. Maybe if he suspended it before having the kids retest it... might need some kind of flooring (for comfort) over those bars... it would be hateful to have to walk or sit on those bars...

You\'ll have plenty more than 35 words available on Monday to tell us about that cage... I can only hope you choose to use them.
person Mechanical Butterfly
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3

and was currently working on convincing Aya that skirts were not meant to be worn over jeans. --I loved these skirt lessons...very cute.

“You’re right,” her father replied, “Its not fair that you’re repeating yourself and giving me a migraine, yet, here I am allowing you to do it.”--lmao!!! Poor Goten..yeah right. I love those kids! Go Aya give your dad a migraine thats so cute! hehe....

“And here I thought you’d say something cute like: because my Mom is or something.” If you asked Vegeta, the twin, why it was he was so powerful he would tell you absolutely that it was his mother’s side that had given him his power. --aww that is so sweet I loved that definition...and the fact he thinks it has to do with the dermination of the Vegeta family...^_^

I hope Aya gets to open that box...

(He liked wildlife as much as the next, but he didn’t think he’d appreciate seeing a bear at this moment.) --GAH!!! *falls over laughing*

Until he pulled back, looked at him very seriously, and whispered—yet again—“mine.” --that lemon was so...ah..*dies*

^.*
-MB-




person Mechanical Butterfly
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4

Because if Aya had come to him bearing a dead hamster and asked why it had died, he probably would have dissected it in front of her impressionable little eyeballs and told her medical fact about how exactly it had died. --lmao!!! I love Goten he is a guy after my own heart...Poor little Aya, if that would have happened that would be horrible...So yes it is best to leave those questions to Trunks.

“But,” she said again, “Grandma’s a boy.”--awww she is tooo CUTE!!!!!! lol I love how Goten is explaing all of this.

(who was under him, in their room, on their bed.)--it\'s nice to see that they finally decided to use their room again.

(Mostly because sex with Chichi was torture on his poor eardrums. Took too long and never paid off.) --rofl, aww well at least he will never have to relive that again.

But his brother turned around and looked at him with that strange sense of dead seriousness.--Oh no...what is he buliding...!!!!

^.*
-MB-

person Ladylupin
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
My home computer is up annninnning!!!
Expect updates very soon!!
Card, get to the pregnancy, Please!!!
Good story!!
person jaygoose
schedule May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That age chart you gave Majin Bulma was very helpful. Me with my silly self was killing myself trying to come up with ages on me own.

But about that cage...What the hell?
person Majin-Bulma
schedule May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O.O Thank you veeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeery Much ^_____________^ -pats her head and givers her a cookie-
person Majin-Bulma
schedule May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O.O Thank you veeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeery Much ^_____________^ -pats her head and givers her a cookie-
person Majin-Bulma
schedule May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
:O:| oooooooooOOOOOOOOOoooooooooOOOOOOOOOOooooooh O__O cages. >.> For Trunks!?! ( Oh ya, Trunks and Goten doing it in the cage XD) O_O XD ahahahaha O_O; Presta in a cage :O:| o.o; o.o >.> i wanna know ;_; ~!!!! >_< throws crutons at the author- O_o OR FEEL MY WRATH x_x AHDAJ SHD JHASDJ HHAHAHAH HAHA HDJAHSJ HAH A ----,.,,,,,, ya im good .O_o; M;lady O_O! Ah. So how old are the kids???????? O_O;

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