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Vegeta realized that logic did not play an important factor in where and when Kakarot thought to have sex, but sometimes he really had to wonder just how he ended up where he did. Like now, he was on his hands and knees in the dirt (yes, they were outside) with his mate buried deep inside of him while his tail was being sucked on (of all things.) Kakarot’s hands were on his chest and his erection and he had to bit his own tongue to keep from alerting any sort of wild animal of his activities. (He liked wildlife as much as the next, but he didn’t think he’d appreciate seeing a bear at this moment.) LOL

Yeah. Since when did Goku ever use logic?

Loved this chapter.

Anon- my post. Forgot to log in.

I can apprieciate Goten\'s view on life. He\'s smart because he\'s a freak of nature. A very realistic view. I agree.

Well...now that you mention it...*Goten and Trunks peek out from behind her* I swear I didn\'t steal them this time!!! They came of their own free will! *stops Card from noticing the chains that kept them with her* :D well i was stumped on what the cage was for but now i agree that it\'s for one of Goten\'s daughters. Which one i\'m not sure about though...

Thank you!
Couldn\'t update on thursday because fat-ass librarian happened to look over at what I was typing.
I am banned for the rest of school year!
Will go to public library soon!
Good Story!

I think the cage is for all those puppies your mamma dog just gave you... well it _could_ be! How\'s the mamma? How many pups? The details woman! Share the details!

I don\'t think a cage could be made strong enough to contain a \'seasonal\' Presta... so if it\'s not for your puppies I haven\'t got a clue what it could be for... Could it be as simple as that? We just haven\'t been exposed to whatever the cage will be for yet?

That chapter didn\'t suck, and yes, it had sucking. (Nice lemoney sucking, mmmmmmmmmmm)

I liked Goten\'s answer to Trunks, I\'m a freak of science.

Ah, back to the lemon, I would have personally cheered Goku and his choice of \'ANYPLACE\', but unfortunately, I couldn\'t find them. Fortunately I had your chapter to refer to. Thanks!

I am glad that Gina and lil\' Geta got some alone time. We\'ll see how they behave when it\'s their turn to rut. *smirks*

I knew Aya\'s hair was black, you said something about somebody ruffling her dark hair, so I assumed it was black. Anyway, this story is getting cuter and cuter. With lots of banging. Always a good thing.

Another excelent chapter!!

What\'s the deal with the cage? Presta\'s new sleeping quarters? LOL

Did you get my email?

More. Now! Can\'t wait.

Wokring on chapter 8. Twist Twist Twist.

Thanks for rolling the lemons in. Maybe our favorite Saiyans will be eating lemon pie... Something sweeet anyway. LOL

Yay! I\'m back and there will soon be more babies. I am glad you decided to skip ahead. Saiyans are so much more funny when they are pregnant.