rate_review Reviews

They would be soooooo dead if either one of them were my mate. Yes the lame \"If your dead I\'ll kill you,\" line, or even better yet, \"Oh, your alive,\" shoves spoon into rib cagd twd twists. I guess I would have a very Gina like reaction, even without the added burdden of being preganent.

I felt sorry for Vegeta. I always do when he is worried about the twins. And quiet, obediant sayian children are somewhat disturbing.

I like the Karrarot Amoung Kings title myself.

I missed this fic SO DAMNED MUCH WHILE YOU WERE NEGLECTING IT!!

*pantpantpant*

I\'m extremly fond of your twins...I\'ve even dreamed about them a few times...yes, I know it\'s totally weird, but as characters, they\'re excellent and I like \'em lots and lots and stuff!!

So I demand you never stop writing about the twins. *makes a sad face* I can\'t wait for the new story!! *whines pathetically*

I know I don\'t review...and I should...as much as I enjoy your stuff...I write LONG assed reviews in my head that never see the computereen.een.

And you\'ve totally spoiled me by being such a regular updater...*beams happily* so I totally forgive the recent lapses which did coincide with AFF.net\'s downtime.

Anyway, I\'ve rambled enough...MORE MORE MORE!!

*coughs*

Talon

That was great!

As for the last sentence of the chapter, it looks like they made it home. And Gohan got some action while he was gone.

Looking forward to the sequel.<

As for a title, how about: Kings and Twins??? *grins sheepishly*

What an evil scheme (was it Gohan or Goten) they came up with. Not letting Presta go back until Gohan learns the dialect. Brilliant. I also agree with Goten giving his half brother his tail back. I don\'t want to think about the insults and name calling that would happen if he went back and didn\'t have a tail.

Goten\'s had a plan for heirs for Kakarott and Ou Vegeta this whole time, huh? Well, that really takes some thinking a head. He\'s genius. That\'s what he is.

Kids eating popcorn while watching the argument. LOL

That was a great chapter.

Definetly angsty. Can\'t wait to see what happens next.

whoo-hoo, it\'s back!
And there\'ll be APAM sequel. Kickass!

Congrats for getting over your hump. I\'m sorrry it made the lemony feeling go away. But then again these fics were your daily dose of Lemonade. Hell, these are my daily dose of your lemons. Everyone thats supposed to has a tail again. Nice wonderful prehensible tails. I now feel sorry for Goku and Vegeta. I really feel sorry for Trunks and Gina. Gina is going to be empathising with Chi Chi soon. Not a lot, considering the differences in circumstances but her husband/mate keeps leaving. Oops. that was my outside voice. please don\'t hit me. *zoning out ... sleepy ... but must review*

You\'re back...Huzzah! That was actually pretty good. I didn\'t mind the angst lemon at all. Geta was mean for making you cry. Now if you don\'t mind. I really must get back to writing...you know I had no idea it was Wed. I got three days to finish the next chapter of THoK. Deadlines...I got to try everything.

I love you!!!! you updated!!!! and i loved it. btw...last night i was reading the last of the frosting chronicles and i have to say...i was an hour late to my class cause i didn\'t want to stop reading!!!! hehehehe can\'t wait for the next chapter.