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Vegeta is such a push over. *smirks* actually, I don\'t think that he is. I think he knows how much more Goku appreciates sex if the baka actually believes that he wasn\'t going to get any.

This being said, not that Vegeta is a woman, but I wanted to quote something: Billy Joel

....\"She never gives up. She never gives in. She just changes her mind....\"

Hehe, I like perogative. I think Vegeta does too.

So, Presta\'s feeling homesick for some unknown reason. Hmm. I can\'t wait to see how that turns out. Very diplomatic of Trunks not to get invovled. That\'s a smart man there.

Holy F\'ing crap! I am having some real issues trying to post reviews here lately. I guess you can see that for yourself, huh?

I just went and checked my quote, only to find that I had the wording wrong. The first one is OUT, not up. That\'s when I found out how many times my last review got F\'ing posted. F@$!!k.

I am really sorry. Hopefully I won\'t post four of these also.

SOOOOOOOOOOOO sorry. I know that it messes up the review count also. I don\'t know how to erase them.

Raditz I love it!! He got peed on LMAO.

YAY!!!
I\'m back!!! After 2 days of blah b/c aff.net would not let me in...I am finally back.
Adn today...well yesterday the 14 was my b-day! yay me!
anyway you are published that is sooooooooooooooooooo awesome
and heck yeah I will pass the site on to everyone I know. That is really great, congrats. You deserve it.
These 2 chapters were hilarious and poor Aya she was making me laugh.
And poor Geta he cracked his bone....aww but I am glad the babies ok
^.*
-MB-

Wow, Lil\' Geta. Having sex while his mom is giving birth. I don\'t know that I could do that. *shrugs* But that\'s just me.

I am surprised that Vegeta or Goku haven\'t murdered at least on of their older sons by now. The boys seem to like pushing the limits, that\'s an awfully fine line to be walking.

Kakaraot got peed on. LOL

I have ADHD, so I know how easy it is to get stuck on a single idea.
Sometimes my minde gets flooded with tons of ideas and it is hard
to type them all down.

Oi. I would havewholwhole heartedly agree with Vegeta about Goku at this moment. Maybe I was wrong when I suggested a couple of weeks ago that Goku may have ADHD. I think that he has ONE single focus. Glares at Goku, \"Go ahead, bite him Vegeta!\"

I am glad that the birth turned out so well. Um, am I confusing Card stories, thinking that Vegeta was suppose to have paternal twins?

This remined me of the episode of Malcolm in the Middle when the oldest son had to help with the home birth \"Now you\'re going to put your hands inside Mommy and deliver that baby\" LMAO

Some parts of the chapter were funny.

When I got to the part where the baby was not moving, I thought it was stillborn; I held my breath. *sad*

And when it was stuck, I was tense.

I forgot the rest of my review. The server pooped again and I lost my review. So I typed what I could remember.

2-something... is that the chapter number or the number of babies Vegeta is birthing (2 or somthing more... much more?)

Yes I do believe Goten has been scarred for life - and I loved it all. So what is up with Trunks? Why hasn\'t he conceived yet (that still sounds so wrong...)

Card Fic #2 checked off the list!