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i have now read Ht,Mt,Gt, and nows ons one and i must say i just love it is sooooooo i don\'t konw, i just love it ...............keep up the good work must read more .....so update so plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

Thanks for the reminder. I had already forgotten. :)

That was a very nice preganant male lemon. I am glad that Goku always wins, but Vegeta almost had him. Making him go into the shower by himself, and handing him the conditioner. LOL, he at least did something! (semi quote, \"Isn\'t there anything you\'d be willing to do?\") It turned out really good anyway.

I\'d forgotten how freaked out Goku gets about, well, insest. That was really mean of the twins to turn their father on their own little brother like that. *Shrugs* Oh, well.

PS, THAT wasn\'t the kind of amusment I thought that the children were going to get themselves into. It was kind of funny though.

Aww...Aya is so cute and Bardock is a little perv. Just like his big brothers. How sweet.

Lmao
I really enjoyed this chap especially the bit about Pan and Presta going at it but not in the lesbian way.
That was funny.

And the beginning when she throws ice water on Gohan YAY! go Presta! that was great.

Oh gods I nearly died when Goku talks about the part with haveing sex with Vegeta and tells the twins they better never know how good that sex is. *sighs* that was hilarious...I also hope they never know b/c Goku might kill them and that is just ugh. ^_~

Goten is so cruel leaving poor lil Geta and Gina to listen to how the twins were conceieved but gosh it was funny.
LoL at Kane and yes Goten is evil.

Ooo I want autographs! hehe....
loved the end notes!

^.*
-MB-

Liked this chapter.

Bardock... tsk tsk tsk. *smirks at Bardock.*

Looking foroward to more. Will read \"moments in a life\" now.

Goten can have quite the ornery streak can\'t he. Asking his dad about how he was conceived and then leaving, only to set Kane up once again. Dang, remind me not to get on his bad side.

Poor Goku, no sex, but I think that I understand Vegeta\'s POV about the subject. Ano set set of twins, OMG.

I like how the children find their own entertainment in these trying times.

Ha! Goku talking to his kids about the lack of sex in his life. Just when I thought that there wasn\'t another way to make that conversation funnier you find it. And then When Goten showed up and asked how Gohan had ever been concieved: “Well,” Dad said, “As it turns out, whether or not you actually have fun, some…stuff…leaks out anyway. That’s how it happened.”---the was classic! You\'re so funny...I think you know that already though.

Oww...I am loved...Joy! You\'re very welcome.

“You’re evil,” Trunks said.

“Yes I am.” Took them back to his lab... LOL!

I ejoy those end notes. lmao.

Line 11 thing. Review above.

Ha! Twin switching...Oddly though, I\'m glad it didn\'t work. Trunks is for Goten and only Goten. Vegeta would have never gone throught with it anyway. Oh did I tell you that the Bribe was wonderful. Because it was. :)