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“She said that she didn’t think she could tell the two of us apart if we didn’t have the scars,” Goten said. --aww LoL I would be mad to if the person I was in love with couldn\'t tell me apart from my twin...

“Because if Goten didn’t kill your ass, I would.” --rofl! what a good plan...looks like Trunks knows his mate. Now I wonder if Gina will pass the test. I hope so.

“Besides,” Trunks said—with an attempt at humor—“You are painfully straight.--lmao! never heard someone call someone else painfully straight, but I have heardit tit the other way around, but regardless this mad me laugh very hard. And I love how well Trunks knows Gotens movements...how he taps and always grins, I liked that.

“Hey,” Vegeta snapped, “I’m very good at being straight, buddy.”--LoL, of course he is!

Trunks and kissed him briefly as his hand pushed into places it ought not be pushed while Vegeta was still on the bed. (I.e. his pants were now invaded.) --rofl!!!!! *dies laughing*

“She knew it wasn’t you.” --aww *claps* I knew she would know the difference between the two!

“I’ve got girl parts,” Trunks countered.--LoL...still mostly boy though ^.~

Aww I do like that Goten and Trunks finally got to have some sex and the tail thing was so cute.

Vegeta: Again I ask: Anyone feel gypped--LoL I DO!!! *sobs while holding bag of dusty unsqueezed lemons*

Lil’Geta: She published the bribe lemon.--Heeelllllpppp! *is dying of laughter* he has a paper baghis his head!!!!!!!!!!! yay! I am glad you published it, it\'s YUMMMMMMMMYYYYYY!!!!

oh yeah I love Tom Cruise he is very rad, but sadly I rarely got to the movies also unless impressed by a preview....actually it\'s not that sad b/c if the movie sucks then I saved some money! yay me!!!!! money for lemons!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Oh my Trunks is stinking. Joy! You know I love baby making banging. It\'s banging with a higher purpose. Joy! :)

I figured they would try the twin switcharoo. LOL

Trunks kimmeimmediatly who was who.

Any similarities you have are minute. Feel free to fuck like rabbits.” Then he was gone.--rofl!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! what a nice dad...hehe

“Rabbits are too quick,” Gohan said--lol, yeah that seems saiyajin to me

Prissy Gina wasn’t showing at all. Not even a little pooch. NOTHING. --aww do I detect a loud hint of jealousy...but he is so cute with a tummy!

“Too far,” was the whine. --rofl

when Kakarot smiled about this, moved to rest between his parted thighs and kissed his neck. --um apperently the rest of this paragraph got deleted because I can\'t seem to uh...FIND THE REST OF THIS LEMON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

“Yep,” he said, “Isn’t that great?” Somehow he didn’t sound exactly like this was the most wonderful thing in the universe.--LoL aww poor thing

Understand? The lemon was just a bribe, its not real. --I know it wasn\'t real...but damn it it was good! very, very good! but I will refrain from my hentai twin language ^.~

and lol at end notes

You didn\'t like the HP movie? awwww I haven\'t seen it, I\'m still trying to go see The day after tomorrow. Sheesh takes me forever to go see a movie. Unless it is a Tom Cruise movie then I am so there!

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Sorry I skipped out on most of the stories yesterday. So, I thought that it was funny that the twins tried to fool their mates. I also wonder what would have happened if the mates hadn\'t been able to tell them apart. (drools while thinking about it.) Anyway, I have to go catch up.

*fluttery eyes*

*after reading one of your responses*

Do the rest of us get to see that lemony bribe??? I promise not to think it\'s real if only I can read about the (NOT REAL ONLY A BRIBE) twincest...

*flutterterfterflutter*

Great chapter.

BTW, that other leg of this chapter is out of view; the leg is currently buried under Goku. ;-)

Grabbed his mother by his arm and yanked him out of the bed. (Naked, unfortunately. --LoL, not rtunrtunate to me.

“You need to get dressed, go find Goten and stop being an ass.rgivrgive him before he has a cow or something and we have to fucking raise it.” --LoL

Goten looked up from the papers scattered acrhis his table. “I’m dancing a jig.”--lol, and he still responds with his special Goten comments...awww

“It was worse,” Goten said. Looked uncomfortable.--It must have been pretty bad if even he is uncomfortable. That makes me sad for some reason. I hate to see Goten like this.

Blah-blah-blah. That’s what Vegeta heard. It was just a lot of ‘bla-blah-blabbity-bla.’ --rofl!

He glared at his child. But he did it lovingly.--those loving glares always seem to make everything better. ^.~

“Sorry for being a prick,” Goten murmured.--that was a very good apology from a saiyajin! I\'m proud!

And awesome lemon, as usual!!!!!


Ok and I posted a chap of Malicious...and I do have to say I hate it..it so cso crappy, but I am already working on the next chap which is hopefully better. Anywho you can send it too my lovely e-mail: mechanicalbutterfly_mg@hotmail.com
Thank you so much! you are so rad! *hugs you*

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Ha! Throwing drinks in people\'s faces. On second thought I take back the soap operah thing. The sex scenes are never this good. :)

That\'s all what the no sex thing was about? Goten needing to be forgiven by his momo heo he decided to punish himself with \'no sex\'? He\'s kind of a masicast(spelling?) isn\'t he.

Well, I am glad that lil\' Geta figured it out, because that was a very nice lemon. And I am certain that Trunks is even happier than I am the whole mess was figured out, because he was the recepient of such a nice lemon.