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when your in the throes of the heat cycle thing, your Saiyan side demanded you lay claim to the good thing you had. And she was not about to sign her obedience over to him. --hehe, I don\'t blame her. I wouldn\'t want to sign over my obedience to Gohan either.

Awww I loved when little Aya ran over to Trunks and they were both on the edge of tears...it was so sad.

They aren’t doing very well,” Vegeta said. Wrapped his hands around the bars and looked toward the fight.--O_O oh no! I hope everything is going to be ok!

“DAD!” Pan screamed, “How could you just…” she motioned at him “My best friend! That’s so gross!” Which just showed off how human she was. “Stop smiling!”--rofl!

You ever learn that spirit bomb bullshit that Dad tried to teach us?” Goten asked. Wiped his forehead and looked at him. Still smirking, but there was the barest hint of fear in him.
“Nope. Too boring.”--@.@! They are supposed to learn everything they can! hehe...

“This thing is going to kick my ass.” Ah, a realistic Saiyan. Whataritarity.--LoL

“The scars!” he said. “That’s it. You’re a bloody fucking genius, Geta. Really. Brothers or not, I could just…kiss you!” --He could and he should and I will watch...*waits for them to kiss*

And a part of Vegeta knew that was not what his brother was going to say, but was rather happy the words Goten intended to say were not said.
“Please, feel free not to.”-- :( I wonder what he was going to say...

“Morons. He was dead in the first five seconds. What the hell was that about anyway?”--lmao!!!

“Whatever. Can we go let everyone out of the pretty cage now?”--LoL, yay everyone can finally get out of the cage and the twins saved the day!!!! *dances and throws confetti*

I loved this chapter...I sorta got to see the twins make out..if you call making out biting each other while power explodes around you in attempts to kill a powerful enemy who indeed did die w/in the first 5 secs but you keep on biting...and I do call that making out! If the twins looked at each other crossed eyed I may call that making out...I\'m weird like that.
“It’s a twin thing,” --Hehe twin thing...riiigggghhhtttt... :)

Presta: I just saw my father and my uncle biting each other.--*drools* What I wouldn\'t give to be Presta at that moment. ^_^

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Okay, huh? What happened. I know you\'ll either explain or write it into the story.

Another good lime. Glad they eventually got to to the cage. Silly Pan, your Dad is half sayian.

“What are you doing here?” Gina asked, “Don’t you have to kill yourself now?”--LMAO! That is such a pleasent welcome..sounds just like something a wife might say if she were married to ayajiyajin who kills himself to get stronger. ^_^

“Twins?” Kakarot asked. Big old goofy grin on his face like this was the greatest thing. (apparently his memory was short lived.) “Non-identical twins. Wow!” --aww he is having twins! yay!!!!

Which of course, made anyone with ears to hear about how Vegeta had been a psychotic asshole with homicidal tendencies and no sense of control while pregnant had moved over to the opposite side of the cage as--RO--ROFL!

“I was supposed to die today, wasn’t I?” she whispered. Stupid ass smart kid_O! _O! aww that is sad...and she is smart!
*pats Aya*

Goten stood up. “I also fight better when I’m horny,” he replied, “So does Vegeta.”--hehe..that is interesting

I loved when the twins were fighting and they went SsJ4 and said everything at the same time and kicked Buu and everything! That was so COOL!

Goten: Remember what I said about those splinters.--lmao!

Oh no! I want to know what oingoing to happen! I hope everything is ok...*is afraid* they told Trunks to leave. *is very anxious*

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I grined the whole time I read the Cell chapter. I was so excited. I think that you did really well. Cell is a bad guy after all so he had to go. *Sighs* It had to be done. I can certainly indentify with Vegeta\'s anger with the Kamehameha. Cell did actually need a technique of his own. It doesn\'t sound right coming from him. I am glad that you mentioned the accent thing too. I read it some where in a fic and I actually hadn\'t noticed until then that he had a slight one.

He bit bit of a priss thought isn\'t he...I like him anyway though...he can get down and dirty when he has to. The twins were funny too. I couldn\'t help but laugh when they tried their hands at the history of Cell. I am pleased, all went extremely well.

“Whupped?” Cell said with a great deal of distaste, “My green ass?”---Ha! that was so cute and funny.

Geez, I got so much catching up to do...but I had to read this one. :)

Hm...that was interesting. I\'m not a fan of Buu. Yes, he was ridiculously powerful and all that other shit. But he had no brains...no finesse. He sucked in my opinion. but it was still a good chapter. I loved the beginning with Presta and Gohan.

Off to try and catch up.

I almost panicked when I thought that Trunks was going to get sucked into Buu. That would have bee a horrible predicatment. I am glad that Trunks killed Frezia before Buu had time to absorb him. That was what Buu was intending, wasn\'t it?

Nice li Not Not a whole lemon, but enough to make it interesting. And I guess that Goten had to stay horny in order to fight better.

to pull the shirt (Kiss My Monkey Ass) on. Vegeta’s said: (One Day You’ll Be as Good as I am.) And Goten’s was a rather simple: (Fuck You.)--LMAO I love these shirts.

Uber-powerful or not, the Twins were not their parents and they hadn’t fought nearly as many battles.--I\'m glad they recognize that and respect that.

and there stood King Cold in all his disgusting glory, smirking and radiating a pitifully low amount of energy.--LMAO

“Good-bye.”--they are so cool! I loved that!

And once in while something truly disturbingly idiotic like “Mwha, Mwha. I am a tyrant. Mwha.” --ROFL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ok that was die worthy laughter....*sighs* must gather breath soon...

“That’s because Gohan isn’t nearly AS STUPID AS THE TWO OF ”--O”--O_O! Ouch... and how did he get out????? I guess I will find out, I hope.

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But he handled that annoyance well, he felt, didn’t kill anyone, didn’t snap at anyone--yeah I think he is doing great. considering the fact that he probably has never been locked in something before...to be kept \'safe\' b/c he is usually the one keeping things safe. It\'s gotta be hard and he did well.

“Stay,” Goku said to Vegeta. Glared at him. --awww he is such a good mate.

He paused, remembered the numbers that he had written down and the original letter he had gotten from the future. Sighed. “Or mom.” --what? did Vegeta die when he sent the numbers to himself or something...*gets watery eyed*

They had one common voice between them, so that whatever he said, Vegeta said. --that is so cute, not to mention VERY COOL..and they are very powerful!

that word just didn’t sound right, and apparently the Prince felt this the same because he was chuckling every time she said it.--*shakes head at Vegeta* He is encouraging children to cuss! shame on him....but he\'s so cute I will forgive him.

“Have fun you smelly bitch,” Aya hissed.--O_O lol!

There are…” he was on the verge of laughing here, “Some places…” choking on the laughter now, “You don’t want…” he was slightly purple, “splinters.” --LMAO..that is just..ewww

and lol at end notes!
I can\'t wait to see the twins fighting at their full power. And do they have a certain amount of time to fight in? B/c what if they don\'t defeat an enemy in \'said\' time and more show up, that would be uncool.
Anywho great chaps and hope Goku can get his lemon soon..poor guy.
Looks like Presta will though.

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It\'s a good thing that Presta decided not to fight Gohan. Not only is she really stronger, but I think that he would have thought,\"What in the HFIL!\" He really isn\'t in tune with his insticts.

Well, another cocky bad guy who\'s about to be beat down because of his attitude and lack of understand the situation.

Hope you continue with that fight, and that they are able to finish it before anyone else shows up.

“Oh fuck me,” Vegeta murmured.
“But you always said I couldn’t,” Goten replied.--lmao...that\'s too bad.
goten always knows how to lighten up a situation.

“Whupped?” Cell said with a great deal of distaste, “My green ass?”--rofl!!! I can see this playing out in my head so perfectly.

Okay. Not exactly the seduction she had expected.--LoL

I love it when thins ins kick ass also!!!!! YAY!!!!
And Gohan is getting lemons all over the place in your fics! Lucky guy.
Oh and *gasp* Videl told him to leave...hehe...good I hate her anyway.
that Presta Gohan lemon was very good. ^_^

I loved when Vegeta\'s power level raised b/c he thought the kamehameha belonged to his brother and dad, and it does!!!!
I suppose your right..cussing does come naturally to saiyajin kids...

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My new favorite.

Go twins!