rate_review Reviews

Hello. Don't know if I have reviewed this before or not, but I have read it before, and I liked it, however... I think something is wrong with it now? There seems to be big chunks of the story that are missing and the text is bunched up and everything, and I don't remeber it beeing like that last time I read it... I wanted to reread it, but now... well, it get's really strange and I'm missing big parts of it. So I was kind of wondering if you happened to have the story saved somewhere so I could maybe get it or somethign? maybe a bold thing to ask, sorry...
Anyway, really liked the story.

.... So I know this story is old as hell but, I was recently reminded of it, and had to find it haha~ I followed it waaaaaay back, and am so sad it never went any further than this! So much potentiaaaaaaaaal!! ;u;
I fell like I spent forever looking for the title to pop up on the pages and pages and pages of fiction here. <3 And I'm so glad I finally found it because, despite the little glitches here and there, things that maybe didn't make as much sense as they should... I still really, really, really love this fiction. It's been one of my favorites forever, and I have read a loooooooooooooooooooooooooot of fiction over the last 3-4 years haha! XD

I just thought I'd remind you that you made this >:3 ... I wonder if you'll even get an alert for this? XD And say YOU HAVE TO PICK IT UP AGAIN OR .... OR.... I really don't know. XD I'd be sooo stoked to see it start up again, just because I'm such a geek like that....

Anyway.. thank you for keeping this up here all this time. <3 It really made my day to stumble into it again.

~Koki

Please Please PLEASE Update!!!

I'm not sure whether you have finished this story or not but it is a really intriguing one. If you have not finished it completely, please inform me once you have posted another chapter.

This is funny and I like the story.
Please update.

wow... that was long..when are you planning to update? :D cause that was just.. hmm need to find the right word for it.. *thinking* til know let's just say that it's absolutly brilliant! i love it... well i didn't like that Tala and kai are the bad guys.. but it's ok.. :D Bryan and Ray are so kawaii.. ^^ please update asap...

YES! Go Bryan. I knew he'd convince them to change the rules back to (almost) normal. It's really weird to see Kai and Tala as such bad guys but it's also refreshing, not the same old thing, right?

Anyways, great job and I hope you update soon!

I should have read this a long time ago. Damn, but this is a good piece. *bows to the amazing Jedi Princess authoress* Have you noticed that aff.net has parts in all their fics posted that have the words slightly scrambled? It's kinda annoying.

update

Hey,

So glad you updated! This was an awesome chapter and hope you can write another soon. I read your fanfic stories and left a review, the username is pretty much the same. Anyway your an awesome author and I know you'll go far. Catcha' later.

-Kami