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by Clarrisani

person chibi drigger
schedule March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww...it\'s so sad...and Rei is a FUCKING DUMBASS!!! -sighs exasporatedly-..I know Tala and Kai were harsh on him!!...But...Bryan is SOOOO diffrent!! -sighs-..Stupid neko-jinn. -shakes head-..Ah well..He\'ll learn...hopefully. And if not him im going for the hot hunk of russian flesh in desperate need of love! -nods puncing chest- Weeeeellll..great chapter and cant wait for more!!! <|@0 - Cd
person keisan
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
True that. Rei seems to be taking the blame for everything unto himself, poor Rei.
person Lullaby Lily
schedule March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! An update! A short one... very short... But an update nonetheless!
Poor Ray... Actually; he *does* know very well he\'s in love... He\'s just trying to think past it...
Not allowing yourself to *every* fall in love... eh... Don\'t make promises we *know* you won\'t keep... Well... which we *hope* you won\'t keep.
And he\'s feeling guilty...Hate to make it worse; but it kind of *was* partly his fault... Both of them; they should have known better than to dare Tala and Kai like that. Not that I blame them, goodness no, I blame one very evil redhead and one very aggressive bluehaired blader....
I really hope you\'re going to update *very* soon!!! I can\'t wait! There\'s still so many questions in my mind... So pretty please, brighten my day; I have to study this week, so this will be the *best* relaxation in the evening...
~Lily~
person Dr.Von Doom
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Doom:well i\'m back.

Dartz:how did it go?

Doom:how did what go?

Reinok:dartz told me you were going to kill kai and tala.

Doom:...fuck! how did they do that?i was but when entered their house they invited me to eat with them before i even say anything and next thing you we\'re all friend and everything and...crap! they\'re good.

Reinok:well anyways,this is the first time i\'ve read this and it\'s very good,poor ray

Dartz:poor ray?poor bryan he\'s hospitalized.

Grim:...damn kai.....damn tala.....

person Mika
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay you updated! I hope Ray gets over his denial, it won\'t help anybody! (except the readers) ^-^!
Mika
person kari_remon
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Way too short of a chapter -needed chapter, Rei keeps getting better and better at \'knowing\' his feelings isn\'t he? - but still it\'s too short - I just can\'t get tired of Rei and (anyone!) fluffiness...
person Hunteress
schedule March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please Continue!!! This is really good!!!
person keisan
schedule March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh. At this point, Kai seems to be disappearing a bit...I mean Tala seems like the main protagonist here. Not that Kai didn\'t have his fair share of being \'the bad guy\' but Tala\'s just off the wall insane and obsessed. Sorry I think I\'m trying excuse Kai in this even though he\'s equally bad, because he\'s like one of my favourite characters...but I can see how Tala\'s just...plain psychotic whereas Kai\'s a little more than devious.

Anyway, excellent fic. Love the angstyness and romance is the nicest touch. Keep it up, hopefully Kai and Tala get what\'s coming to them. And poor Bryan! Rei too...though observing him in this story he\'s got quite the sense of intuition. Awesome.
person Lullaby Lily
schedule March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Pretty please with a cherry on top?
person Chibi Drigger
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_O...Holly shit...I read the thing from chapter one because I lost track of this months and months ago..In like....June or somthing.....And let me say...You sertainly ARE known for yar angst. ....Last couple chapters -specially the last- my heart was right up in my throat!!!! MORE SOON!!!!! Great chapters!!!!!!

C|@0!!

-Cd

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