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(reviewing chapter 3)
Tala IS a manipulative jerk! *shivering* He\'s really SCARY!!! Ray\'s right! He NEEDS treatment in mental institution really badly!
Oh and the \'Bryan saved me from food poisoning\'; hehe indeed he did. *Sigh* Bryan\'s your rescuer Ray!

(reviewing chapter 5)
Hehe, I saw that movie \'You\'ve got mail\' only last night! I\'m totally in the mood ^^!
Cute chappie, especially the last bit.
And, I learned two new English expressions: the candle thing and \'hit the hay\'. The last one\'s totally cute!! It\'s soo going to be my nickname on msn for a while!
Anyway, the next reviews will be something for tomorrow. It\'s late, and, well, it\'s time to \'hit the hay\' ^^.
~Lily~

Hey!
Guess who\'s reviewing this story... ME! ^^
Long story how I actually found this one. I don\'t usually read much stuff on adultfanfiction. Anyway, IT\'S GREAT!!!!!!!!!!! I\'ve read the entire story, but because I think it\'s sooo great, I\'ll review all the chapters I really liked or fascinated me.
I love the way you portrayed Ray in this chapter; so incredibly vulnerable, feeling ill, dirty and empty... Very angsty!!!
I also like the fact that Rei has to put on make-up, so nobody would notice how zombie-like he looks. Intruiging. Actually, this entire story is intriguing... I TOTALLY LOVE IT!!
Anyway, I really gotta go now, my class begins :( . More reviews to come soon, promised :)!
~Lily~

its probably kai and tala, those basterds, if it was up to me, i\'d have the great leviathen swallow those two!!! actually, maybe just tala, i really hate him.do tell what happens next

Love it, Update soon?

I\'d bet my money on Tala and Kai... Aren\'t they plotting to get Ray back? I\'m hoping on something that will involve Ray being rescued by Bryan, am I getting my hopes to high? Guess I\'ll never know until the end of the story.
Can\'t say this was boring at all, flufiness is always necessary and welcome... even if it\'s with Bryan _and_ Ray.
“One more comment like that and you will be on the floor.” Lavender eyes narrowed. “Polishing my shoes at that.” Humm, loved this line, almost seemed as if the secons part was... a correction, an excuse to hide a hint on his true meaning...

Ohh, Rei and Bryan better be careful. I am surprised they acted so boldly with Tala and Kai in the room (mainly Tala), but Rei does feel safe when he is with Bryan... Kyah! Cute chapter! ^^

If I had to make a guess, I would bet my money on Kai and Tala. Those asses dunno when to quit. This is getting really good. Looking forward to seeing more.

Good fic! I am amazed to find a story at this site that is actually well-written and has the characters kept somewhat intact. I cannot wait to read more if you so desire to write more! ^^

(does happy dance) I knew it! I knew it! Spencer and Lee, whoopiee! Now, there\'s a pairing! I like it! And isn\'t Rei a firecracker, thought for a moment there that Bry was gonna have sit on him. (Ohh, naughty image) Wonderful job as always.