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by Clarrisani

person G.K
schedule November 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was a good read. I think you should kill that damn cat off though have tala or kai run over it or drop it out of a window or something. ^_^
person Blackrose
schedule November 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Man this is a great story. I love the way you\'ve put Bryan\'s character in the whole thing. I hope Tala and Kai don\'t cause any trouble. Hope to see Bryan and Ray get together asap. And hope Bryan gets out of there too. Looking forward to reading more.
person Mizuyah
schedule November 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh. Tala\'s so crafty. Bryan\'s hand trembling - wow - could he actually be frightened of Tala. Does is have something to do with his past. Dun dun dun.
person Catty
schedule November 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
dang... poor bry.. now when is there going to be some rei/bry moments??? will rei come back to convince bry to leave?? hopefully rei will try and save bry... poor guy...

Catty

ps - btw GREAT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Mizuyah
schedule November 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Denial is a horrible thing, Rei.
person G.K
schedule November 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor rei so lonley... Oh well bryan will be back, they always come back.
person Blackrose
schedule November 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh. No! He can't promise that. Hope to see some action asap. Hope they get together and hope Tala and Kai don't get in the way or cause trouble. Looking forward to reading more.
person SnowIce
schedule November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I wonder how Kai and Tala are going to react to Rei's sudden departure...
Should be interesting...*grins evilly*
person lady snowblossom
schedule November 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah boy, Lee knows! Now, if we can just get that blasted, sexy stubborn Russian to admit it! Well, now we'll just to see how that prize pair of jerks take Rei's being gone; hope they don't do anything to Bry. Wonderful job, and I'm so glad you updated! I was going through withdrawal! Heh, heh.
person Death Girl Miya
schedule November 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whoah...I usually go with the KaixRay but this was awesome! Lee found out O___O Oh well plz update I really love it.

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