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Was it just Bryan & Tala or was it a threesome like with Rei? Good chap.

Oh yes! It's looking pretty hot. I can't wait for the actual fireworks, if fists come into it.
Otherwise...pleas update!

oooooo dang.. GO BRYAN!!!!! lol and yes.. Run Rei RUN!!! lol KeepKeep up the awesome work!!!!

Catty

Another good Chapter.
Please update with next Chapter soon.

Pretty good chapter.

Nice. Enjoyed it. 8/10. Keep up the good work.

VERY NICE STORY!!!!!!!!!! ^_^ took me two days to finish but i am now ^^ Please Update soon. I love Bryan and Rei... and yea Kai probably would be pissed after being pulled over lol serves him right in the this story... pity ... i like Tala and Kai lol should've had like Kai and Tal flicking them off as Bry and Rei waves and high 5'ed each other... ^____^

KEEP UP THE AWESOME WORK!!!!!!!

Catty

Ok, let it rip! Oh, sorry, having a moment. Right, now to get serious. Clis, if I didn't like this story, I wouldn't be bugging you about it, nor would l let you use it to bribe more chapters of 'I'm a father' out of me. And does it sound like I'm gearing Rei up for a miscarriage, such is not my intention.

Let's see, we have twoughtughtless, oversexed jerks, one poor sick, confused and sy goy going nuts neko-jin, and a falcon, who can turn on you in a New York minute; talk about drama! Personally, I want to chemically castrate the above mentioned jerks and let them go with out it for a few weeks; let's see if they get the message.

Actually, I'd love to see them catch Bryan and Rei in the middle of something nasty and have Bryan lay down the law to them.

You do so well at keeping everyone in character and that is one of the things I love about your stories, a wit with interesting storylines and such.

I could keep blathering, but I don't want to take up too much space, so I'll close with KEEP DOING WHAT YOU'RE DOING!

That is so sweet. Wow, Rei almost told them...so close.

Wow, I really love this fic. I really hope you continue! ^-^