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by Clarrisani

person rejiita
schedule September 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
sweet chappie =)
person SorrowWolf
schedule September 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aaww... So sweet! Bryan and the little kitty. What a image. Great chapter! Man, Bryan is intelligent. Hehe, fight, hell yeah XP Awsome! Keep on writing!
person Bleeder
schedule September 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I mean, wow! You have a very smooth and captivating writing style. I love how you manage to highlight the problems in the relationship and have Rei suffering without making the fic into one more piece of pointless angst. And the thought of Rei and Bryan together is one I'd certainly never thought of--although I readily admit that it's a delicious mental image. I also admire how in character you've kept them, and that Brya isn't immediately jumping in to save Rei from his boyfriends' ravagings. It restores my faith in fanfiction writers that you've realized that only Rei can remove himself from the situation into which he so blissfully sauntered into. I look forward to the next post.

Bleeder
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schedule September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have no idea who'd win but my money's on Bryan. That cat seems to like Bryan huh? Maybe that's a sign? I wonder if Chund Hu don't like Tala and Kai because he can sense the discomfort within Ray when he is around them. Can't wait for the next chapter!
person Mizuyah
schedule September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww, come on! There's really no contest. Bryan would win hands down. You gotta admit, he's a tad smarter than Tala and see things in perspective. Not to mention he's built.
person rejiita
schedule September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
let Bryan win!! :D yeah!
person The Valkyrie
schedule September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Bryan wins.
person Mizuyah
schedule September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's amazing how you manage to write these stories and tap into the many different emotions, especially one such as this, one which is often so difficult to empathise with. How do you do it?
person rejiita
schedule September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
poor poor rei!!
person G.K
schedule September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
good as always.

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