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by Clarrisani

person Mizuyah
schedule September 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh yay! Pwetty kitty.

"can't get sick of sex" He's beyond sick.
schedule August 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh! Ray has a kitten now!!!! How cute! But how rude of Tala and Kai to interrupt his play time with his new kitten! I hope Bryan comes back and saves him!!!!
person The Valkyrie
schedule August 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sweet kitty. and I can imagine Tala begging like that. kai and tala seems like real sex maniacs in this fic, but I think they love Rei. Or maybe I'm just naive.
person Castles in the sky
schedule August 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like the kitty!!!! How come he comes as a bonus? I finally got back on here, it's a nightmare when lots of people are on!! Poor, I , I kinda feel sorry for him having to live with such bastards. And Bryan is pretty much an iceheart anyway, so Rei doesn't have much going for him, has he? Is the kitty going to serve as Rei's new companion? Do continue, I'm off to find another story I'm tracking on here!!!
Updates soon?
~Castles
person avril
schedule August 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hi, I think this is the most interesting Beyblade fic I have ever read. really. I hope that you'll keep it updating :)
avril
person Mizuyah
schedule August 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I reckon he either didn't want to, or he's hiding sometime...more sliding to hiding something. Maybe, I've got an idea what.
person rejiita
schedule August 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
good chap!! really really good!!
Hope you update soon!
person SorrowWolf
schedule August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
... LET'S KILL THEM! How can someone be an idiot like Tala, or Kai? Tala is actually one of my favorite characters, and it's amazing how quickly you me hate him in this story. SUPER! I lthisthis fic! I really hope that Ray that will kick those guys asses! Or, it would be better if Bryan did! He can do the kicking, Ray can do the curses. XD Just kidding. Someone of them can talk some facts into Kai's and Talas' thick heads! *whacks them with flatside of her sword* *sigh* I want to read the whole stnow,now, update fast please? *makes werewolf puppy eyes*
person Kang-Lin
schedule August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, ma goodness what I\'ve been missing. God this fic its just...................SO AWSOME XD. And yes, poor Ray !_! being used like that :(. My heavens, Kai & Tala need to control themselves, if not poor Ray wont last. I think Ray should get him self a restraining order for both Kai & Tal >.> lol. Anyways great chaps, I so look forward for more updates ^ _ ^.
person Mizuyah
schedule August 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww! You just feel so bad for Rei...Tala sounds like me; a weakness for chocolate.
Oh, how could they deny him the chocolatey goodness...lol.

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