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for Centrepiece

by Clarrisani

person Shadow Vampiress
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I\'m thoroughly enjoying it. It\'s humorous that\'s for sure. Please update soon. Adios.
person dino
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM

PLease, please, pease get back to this and update, please! ur killing me here.
person Chibi Drigger
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
x333 LOVE BRYAN!!! -parties- Always have. ^_^....Well...almost ^^U But ANYWAY lovED it!!! ^_^ MORE SOON PWEEASE!!! Hehehe. Ciao. -Cd
person Futile Faith
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m liking the way this fic is going!! ^_^ And I like that speech that Bryan gave, it motivated me to do something nevermind that this is only fiction!!
person Arsinen
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Although I think the chapter could stand being longer and maybe some interaction bewtween the other three bladers backing up Bryan. It was pretty funny also the guy could have used with name makes it less confusing. Anyways I hope the next chapter is funnier than this one. Hopefully all four of the captains can trash talk the other teams. And get the leaders all riled up. ^_^ Anyways update soon please. ASnd another favor could it be possible to have more Rei Bryan interaction? Please. *puppy eyes* See ya hope you update soon. ^_^
person lady snowblossom
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You go, Bryan! Take that snot down a peg or two. Heh, why don\'t you offer to SHOW the rookie how its done. Purely for his education, you understand. Wonderful chapter! Update soon.
person Shorty*
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Geez, it\'d be a sad day in the Beyblade world if the sport was \'revolutionized\' in that horrible way. Man, that\'s a bleak picture. I must say, that I loved watching Bryan knock that kid down a few pegs. Byran had some good lines. Good work.
person Taiy-Chan
schedule July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great job, once again. YAY!! You updated! It made me happy.

Go Bryan!! You show that rookie! I think he has it all right, just what I\'d say to that rich boy.

Just I wouldn\'t hesitate to beat him with my metal crutch. MUHAHAAHAHAHAH!!!!

Okay, just a BIT crazy tonight, not much.

Owww.. my legs hurt!! Stupid working at the barn.. Grumble grumble. But all for the best! Can\'t wait for our show!

Anyways, I\'ve been rambling, sorry. But I hope I made these couple of minutes(?) interesting for you...

SO YOU\'LL UPDATE SOONER, OF COURSE!!

I can\'t wait!!!

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(Wow, that was a LOOONNNG review!)
person Blackrose
schedule July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is getting better and better. I love this story and I\'m soooooooo glad you updated. I\'ve missed reading this. Looking forward to the next part.
person bloody_Brandy
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man you have got a great story here. Keep updating!

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