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July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
-parties- WoOt! ^-^ Updateness! -hums- Great chapter. -giggles- And can\'t wait for yar next update!!!! ^_^ Ciao! -Cd
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July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Humm, are we up for some beyblading? I hope so, I\'m curious on how you\'ll make the beyfights as interesting as the storiy line...
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July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
At Last! An update and an interesting one at that! Ooh, something tells me that the \'new management\' is gonna find out that Rei and Bry are no pushovers and I can\'t wait to see what they come up with when the idiots treat them like shit. This is gonna be good! I LOVE the smell of singed hide in the morning! :lol: Great job, as usual! Next chapter please.
When ARE those two gonna stop denying the obvious and get down to business? (want some lemon for my viewing pleasure)
When ARE those two gonna stop denying the obvious and get down to business? (want some lemon for my viewing pleasure)
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July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great job! Though a little short. This story\'s awesome so far! Keep it up and update soon ,k?
~*~Taiy-Chan~*~
~*~Taiy-Chan~*~
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July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is getting better and better. That BBA! Load of jerks. Hope they don\'t get in the way and hope Kai and Tala don\'t cause anymore trouble. Looking forward to reading more soon.
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July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lord...lord....I love this fic!! It\'s awesome and you put everyhting else to shame!
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July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeease continue.
Your writing is utterly magnificent~
Your writing is utterly magnificent~
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June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmmm interesting developementa occuring..............cant wait for more!
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June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, Kai & Tala were certainly a tad out of character, although parts of them were left intact. Meh, I didn\'t care for their treatment/your interpretation of them. However, as bad guys go, they were certainly \'good\' ones; clever, manipulative, and all those tricky bad things. Plus they gave us plenty of broken!Ray, which I hadn\'t really seen before. All in all, it was a good story so far. I like the Ray/Bryan turn you\'ve taken, especially how they keep avoiding the relationship between them. I hope there\'s more to this story and you haven\'t left it open ended like that!
Also, I had a thought that the Bladebreakers and the White Tigers should end up living together in a big house or something when they got older. Just one of those lovely random thoughts... ;)
Also, I had a thought that the Bladebreakers and the White Tigers should end up living together in a big house or something when they got older. Just one of those lovely random thoughts... ;)
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June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooh funny chappie, very good ^_^, please continues soons!