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by Clarrisani

person Lullaby Lily
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please, please, please update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lily~
person Lullaby Lily
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bryan\'ll do good as captain I think.
And what was the \'\'you might be surprised thing\"?
Can\'t wait to read more; as usual. :)
See you!
~Lily~
person kari_remon
schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(laughs) ice-cream? I\'d never guess it... Ray and Bryan as team captains, would mean they\'d have to fight no? That\'d be interesting to see, if it happened. I can\'t see why it wouldn\'t work (it\'s the author who makes it works anyway...)
person Kit-Cat Caitlin
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmmmm...... yeah... they\'d make good captains.....

Hehehe... I can picture him with the icecream too.

I really need to stop clicking on things..... I\'m goin\' everywhere... and most places i shouldn\'t... Oh well. :D
person Arsinen
schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I personally think that Rei would make a great team captain he\'s calm and listens...well most of the time anyway. Please make Rei captain. About Bryan I\'m not sure though i think he\'d make a good captain no matter what. He\'s been in the abbey so think they\'ve all had a hand in being leader. Well blah to me see ya when you update. ^_^ Please make Tala and Kai good again make them realize that they were being bastards and turn themselves in. PLease well anyway peace out. ^_^
person Chibi Drigger
schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Of couuurse it will work!! :P Tala was never really a leader in any of the seasons anyway! So who cares what happens to that basterd!! And Kai. -grumbles- But meh. Love your fic and can\'t wait for another update!! Ciao~! -Cd
person PinkOopa
schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahh...i luv u! ^-^ the story is amazing and has basically all the things you could want in a story. Some very hot smut with a very well developed plot. =] I have a feeling you\'ll be ending it soon though =[ which makes me sad yet very anxious as to how the ending would turn out. I wish you would go on a little more though with the Rei and Bryan and maybe in a...few...more smutty lemons ^-^ Anywhoo...update soon! *mwah

-PinkOopa
person Blackrose
schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is getting really good. Ray as a team captain? I was really hoping Tyson would be. Hope Kai and Tala don\'t cause anymore trouble. Looking forward to reading more.
person Hikaru_chan_4ever
schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think it would! heheh .. it would put in a whole new meaning to the words, \"captain to captain.\" ^.^ Update soon. can\'t wait to read the story u just put up. hehe. . have fun. JA NE!
~Chan
person Lullaby Lily
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aah... \'Can you... feel love?\'... That is so cute! But oh, Bryan didn\'t have the chance to answer!
It seemed a little sad, the \'can you feel love\'... Why would he ask...? Because, even though he\'s in his denial phase, he still somewhere knows that he has feelings for Bryan. If Bryan would say \'no\', that would make him feel miserable, of course, but on the other hand, it would strengthen his denial and everything, and he really gets to say and think \'I\'ve only been imagining things\'... I guess it\'s some twisted reverse psychology :-).
I hope you\'re going to update soon!
~Lily~

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