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I'm glad to see this updated. I remember finding this over at Mediaminer and now I rediscover this here. Now that I'm caught up, I would like to say I am enjoying this story. I've always felt Gohan was ripe for a little angst and I believe you have given it to him. It's been interesting to see how a little self-doubt is slowly turning into self-loathing. With his feelings of inadequacy being compounded by the chemicals, things are not looking bright for him. I will be very interested to see where you take this. At any rate, you story is worth the wait.

I love the way you have incorporated the reality of Drug Addiction from the user's prospective. And it is very accurate because most people with addictions, whether it be of alcohol or pain meds, feel the people that use with them can understand them better than thier own families or friends but don't realize that their friends are also leading them down a destructive path by enabling thier addiction. Kudos to you! I guess I should say that Bulma and Videl aren't getting though to Gohan...maybe it's Goku or Vegeta's turn to step in...I also smell an intervention coming. By the way, I'm actually torn whether I want Gohan to get with Kris, I mean the coupling is cool, but also destructive...but I'll leave the creativity to you. Keep up the good work!!

i was wondering if this story is still on going or not? it's been forever since the last update and i was gettin worried! I love this story and don't wanna see it end.

Cool. I read this story a looong time ago. It stopped at chapter 10 and stayed there for the longest time. Really excited to see more. The angst and depresion is really cool. Hope to see more, been waiting a long time...

So he ditched another session with the shrink...Bulma's not going to take that well.

And although I am sad the confrontation with Videl led to a broken nose, I am glad he finally got the message to her that he wasn't interested in her any more.

oh, i love this story! You know, The females are starting to annoy me! Expecially Vadel! That woman needs to be smacked upside the head. Gohan just needs to get a backbonde and tell her to get lost. She really isn't much of a positive aspect in his life right now... or ever, really.

Again, a very great chapter! Stupid Bulma and Chichi just barging in! I do feel bad for Lian, being left at Gohan's appartment like that...I do have to wonder how the two women would have reacted had it been Kris on the floor instead. *smirks* I like Kris, and how he makes Gohan feel.

Now to wonder if Gohan will actually go to that appointment Bulma set up, and if so...how it will go.

I've been a long time fan of this story and have never reviewed. I was pretty happt when you started to update again. Anyways, your writing techniques are amazing. You have a true gift for describing things. How Gohan acts, his feelings toward other people, how people react to him... they just seem so real. I loved this chapter in particular... well probly because it had hints of lemon in it, yeah that preobly did it. I like how you made Kris have scars as well, I think thats what truly made the chapter for me. I think it helped Gohan come out of his shell just a little bit and it made all the difference. ok, I'm babbling now. Good job and keep up the good work.

you know, I usually really hate these kinds of stories, and avoid them like the plague, BUT! I really really like this one, and I spend way too much time thinking to myself about how much I want the next chapter. Just thought I'd let you know that you have at least slightly corrupted me, and made me stray from my normal story preferences. congratulations. ^-^

PS - MORE!

YEAH! :) I loved this chapter. You were right, you kept it very light. Glad to know you are working out the more difficult parts of this story. I can' wait to see what you have in mind next!