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for Young Man's Heart

by Rogue

person Macha
schedule December 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh no. What fun is a lemon if the participant isn\'t/wasn\'t coherant enough to read/know about it? Now it seems like there are only two people that don\'t know what happened on Saturday. One of them being Gohan, the other being ME. AAAAAAaarg. hehe. Reguardless of my \'frustrations\' and Gohan\'s confusion, this chapter was written VERY well. A great story to read.

I hope you can update sooner than you did this time. (looks at own record on updating) Well, I certain shouldn\'t be complaining about that now should I?
person Midnight Dreams
schedule September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Please e-mail me when you update. The fict is really good.
person macha
schedule September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh, No Lemon? Well, I guess it would reallly depend on Gohan, and I am certain he 'thinks' he isn't ready for yaoi yet.

Oh, so close. hehe

This was a good chapter. I understand your warnings about the drug abuse though. What would he feel like in the morning if he wasn't sure of his 'interests' and followed through with them, only to have to deal with the reprocussions later? I don't know.

Update soon please.
person macha
schedule September 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wowsa, What's Gohan getting himself into? Other than my curiosity, I don't know what to say. It was a very well written chapter, and I am going to be waiting for the next update.
person macha
schedule August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
If I were Gohan, I would have wanted Videl to leave also. Made me mad, and she wasn\'t even trying to clean my place up. ARg..... and Chi Chi? Well, I guess she is a dilusional mother most the time, Gohan has had his whole life to get use to her. I am glad he was able to say what he said to her, maybe she\'ll understand that he\'s a grown up. (or maybe not?)

Yeah, Goku trying to understand what drugged or intoxicated people are trying to tell him is kind of funny. He was sweet about it though.

Will Gohan meet the guy from the hospital again? I hope so. Good chapter.
person macha
schedule August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
If I were Gohan, I would have wanted Videl to leave also. Made me mad, and she wasn\'t even trying to clean my place up. ARg..... and Chi Chi? Well, I guess she is a dilusional mother most the time, Gohan has had his whole life to get use to her. I am glad he was able to say what he said to her, maybe she\'ll understand that he\'s a grown up. (or maybe not?)

Yeah, Goku trying to understand what drugged or intoxicated people are trying to tell him is kind of funny. He was sweet about it though.

Will Gohan meet the guy from the hospital again? I hope so. Good chapter.
person Majin Bulma
schedule July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ahhh. You gotta update soon ^^! ilove your writing style. Its new, and good. ^^ love it. Poor Gohannnnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! o.o! ^^ hope to hear more!

Bulma
person Macha
schedule July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Although it is a bit angsty, it is very well written. You have definetly set the table as to what Gohan\'s feelings on his life are. Now I want to know where this is all going to lead. So.... I am going to read the next chapter when you post it!
person VegetaDaimoh
schedule July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hm, i like this! good writing, i\'m looking forward to more.

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