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January 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The fourth chapter was great *hugs then blushs* hhhaaa sorry this story is great through *smiles* its the best I\'ve read!!!!
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January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...I can\'t make myself read more than the first chapter.
1. You\'re writing in English, not Japanese. Cut the fangirl Japanese.
2. Characterization. I don\'t recognize the characters, it makes no sense. Not interested in reading about strangers.
1. You\'re writing in English, not Japanese. Cut the fangirl Japanese.
2. Characterization. I don\'t recognize the characters, it makes no sense. Not interested in reading about strangers.
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January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey i love reading your fic...please make the next one soon please
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January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOO! Roy can be so mean? ooh but Envy is just so sexy!
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November 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi. In spite of the bad grammer, this is a good story. But you could really do with a beta reader. If English would be my mother language, I\'d do it, but I still make too many mistakes myself.
Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter!
Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter!
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August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
phew!! that's a GREAT story!!! I like yours very much... First because it's the first envyxed fic I've ever read.. Before i read yours, I never thought about pairing those two cutie... hehehe... thx 'bout give me some inspiration ^^. Secong, your way to telling a story is great... it's make me understand faster than usual... but maybe you'll like to repair your grammar...it's not like that I mind it too much, but it will make your story greater!
'Kay... sorry if it's too long... I'm waiting for your next chappie. Bye...
'Kay... sorry if it's too long... I'm waiting for your next chappie. Bye...
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August 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hehe cute! I feel sorry for envy..I hope he ends up with ed...THREEESOME! *cough* anyway..continue!