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Hey *g+

Ahhhh this story is SOOOO funny... I laughed quite loud and then I had my mother asking what's going on... God I love lies ^.~
Thanks for writing this story!!!

Bye bye
Yours
Lucis

Oh em gee. This made me laugh so hard. I want to thank you for making my day.

I love you. And the story too.

HAHAHA THAT WAS PRICELESS!!

I can see Yamcha with Tien, Piccolo with Dende, Gohan with Mirai Trunks and Krillin with Chaotzu.

to the homosexual support meetings *laughing like crazy* is so funny

Well, I hate it personally. In fact, I think it blatantly sucks. But it\'s unique and surprising so that\'s good. I think it\'s just too.... empty. It\'s like a shell of a story ya know? I realize it\'s written for comedy\'s sake (or God I should hope so) but it needs more... EVERYTHING. It needs more story, more emotion, more THOUGHT. The characters are more indepth in the God damn series then this. It was just pretty dumb.

I dunno, I\'ll read another story by you and see if it\'s just this story or if your style bites the big one. haha

Camaro