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February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awe, this is quite good, I like it! Great plotline, as was the portrayal of the characters. The fic is also rather well written and the sex scene was very nicely described!
Only one thing I want; Ed/Envy all the way, hehe!
Please do continue, okay, so I'm very well aware of the lack of updates, but still, pretty please!
Only one thing I want; Ed/Envy all the way, hehe!
Please do continue, okay, so I'm very well aware of the lack of updates, but still, pretty please!
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February 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Make more also Invy doesn't really have a gender Invy looks like a girltoo me.
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September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*starts crying* PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEE HURRRRRY!!!!!*stops crying* great story !! i personally liked the next to last or last( not sure XP) thing envy toucht at the second chapter!!!^///^AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHH I CAN\'T BELIEVE I SAID THAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!-///- so please try to make the next chapter soon i\'m no good at waiting -_-;!!!!!
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September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAASEEEE HURRY!! BTW great story ^_^!!! Keep it up!!!( sorry if I spelled something wrong)(I such at spelling ;-_-!!!!!)
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September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE will you continue this? I truly like this fanfiction and since everyday I\'m on the computer I always see if anythings new.... P.S that\'s my computer adderess(sp?);^_^;
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September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please continue!!
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July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE, PLEASE!!!!!!! *puppy dog eyes* I wuv it!!! Finally! A good smut fic of RoyXEd and EnvyXEd without any Roy bashing!! Come to think of it, this fic reminds me of some of the doujinshi I downloaded. Sadly, I couldn\'t find any of EnvyXEd . . .however there was plenty of RoyXEd!! XD
*glomps* PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!!
~*~*~*~Hikaru Irving~*~*~*~
*glomps* PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!!
~*~*~*~Hikaru Irving~*~*~*~
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July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok I am a huge fan of Roy and Ed hooking up and starting to like Envy and Ed pairings. So I will like who ever you decided should get Ed. Keep up the good work on this story and update when you can.
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July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
holy shit that was good... I understand writer\'s block I have it too
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July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great job! I\'m sooo not a fan of EnvyxEd but a huge one of EdxRoy. Keep up the awesome work!!