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July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh great gods and goddesses please write more that was WONDERFUL it was good enough Affie calle me at 3 IN THE MORNING to get me to read it. keep up the great work and thank you for sharing we both enjoyed it
Rysha and Affie
the frustrated bards
Rysha and Affie
the frustrated bards
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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That story was not bad at all! Why do you think that? I liked it. Keep on writing, you\'re excellent.
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That is probably one of my favorite RoyxEd fics I\'ve read in a while. Kinda sad that you ended it there, but still a great fic. The jacket thing was cute too.
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This fic must be one of the best Roy/Ed i ever read... i hope you\'ll write some more!^_^
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love ur fic!! but u spelt colonel wrong and it kinda pissed me off, but the story was awesome!!
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October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was one of the sweetest things I have EVER read! You have to understand that I don\'t cry. Two weeks ago I broke my arm in four places in such a way that when the sergen saw the x-ray all he could say was \"OH, M...\" and twitch, I didn\'t shed a single tear. But this story was so (for lack of a better word) heartfelt I couldn\'t help it, I sobbed like the teenage female I am.
I think the most compelling thing about it was that it portrays how we all want to feel and have thoses same emotions felt by others for us. Lets face it, we may be male or female, black or white, old or young, it dose not matter: we all want to have someone, anyone, love us to the point of need; for them to be mentaly unable to live life as they once did without us, and thus in turn us for them.
Your story states this, an undeniable force by which we live or lives, whithout the need for words. Your story defines, in a male/male manner, what is undefinable without using that word.
LOVE.
I think the most compelling thing about it was that it portrays how we all want to feel and have thoses same emotions felt by others for us. Lets face it, we may be male or female, black or white, old or young, it dose not matter: we all want to have someone, anyone, love us to the point of need; for them to be mentaly unable to live life as they once did without us, and thus in turn us for them.
Your story states this, an undeniable force by which we live or lives, whithout the need for words. Your story defines, in a male/male manner, what is undefinable without using that word.
LOVE.
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October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoied the story and love the coat staying. it was na ahhhhhhhhhhhh how sweet moment. And there is a future.
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September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved this fic! So sweet and I think it was original. Thanks for the great read!
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June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow. That story was so wonderful!! The ending of the series really had me depressed. . .but your story was such a wonderful way to make the ending less harsh and I looove Roys and Ed together. So yah, thanks for the wonderful story!
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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is a great fic - you\'ve got me wondering whats going to happen next are you planning a sequal or will it be left as it is?