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for In Our Dreams

by aisubeki

person KojiTozenHiwatari
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great, you should make anther one, of Ed getting back, Seeing his brother and Roy again. It would be so cool if you did.
person Mija
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg sappy?? that was beautifull it made me cry..I loved it...it was really good, I just wish there was more, I feel empty sort of...I want a happily ever after..sniffles...I want Ed to go home and see Roy and Roy see him...and Al too..but mostly Roy...I want them to just look speechless and then come together and all that goofy mushy stuff that comes with it...sigh...again very beautifull I loved it..ty..huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
person Xiaolang\'s Ying Fa
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NO!! THAT SO DID NOT SUCK!!! That was so cool! And awesome! And so beautiful! And just so...so cool! It was so pretty! I just love the Roy/Ed pairing! So please write some more like it! And that jacket part! Ooh...that was to die for! That was the best part of any story i\'ve ever read! It was soooo...sooo COOL!! I just love time dimention swaps and warps and stuff...So cool! Oh! It was so sad....and so sad....but so very awesome! Anyways, please continue to write such awesome material!

Love,
Xiaolang\'s Ying Fa

PS, if you already got a review from me, sorry! My compie malfunctioned and i had to redo it! ^^
person -Kat- (2 lazy 2 sign in)
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHAT THE FUCK IS WRONG WITH YOU? That story was......was.... incredible. Please continue, write another story to go with this or somethin... Plz... *gives you cookies*
person YuriKuro
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holly damn freakin shit!!
This fic is SOOOOOOOO AMAZING!!!!!
But WWWHHHHHAAAAAATTTTT THE HELL! *Snif*....It can\'t end just now...
Then again, even though I think it shouldn\'t end, the last chapter was something...quite an original idea you got there with the jacket...caught me off guard, really great!!^^
The lenght of your chapters are perfect and it\'s really well written. There\'s only one thing that fucked my mind real bad though : a couple of paragraphs were a little too long...@_@. I just lost track for a while...(I\'m just saying...^^)

Anyway, if this is your first fic then I really can\'t wait for another one!!! I\'m writing Naruto fics and I\'m about to start some other ones of GetBackers and Peace Maker Kurogane and DAMN I have to say that your style makes me jealous!!=^.^= You really are AWSOME!!Way better then me!!!LLOOOLLL

Oh and you have my e-mail address above, so if you ever do another fic from whatever anime, PLEASE send me a warning...something...anything!!Héhé..I wanna read everything that you write!!*Geez...hope I\'m not giving a stalker image here...if I do, this is totally unintentional*lol

Keep on going!!^_~

See ya
person aspiker
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh please, don\'t say your work sucked. It was actually quite good. The writing is good and the plot sweet. 8-)
person Fake
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice, except for the misspelling of \"Maes\"

Best of Luck

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