rate_review Reviews

I am really liking this fic. It\'s intruiging, interesting, and an all around good read. Well, I was inspired by the scean when Wufei was brushing his hair, so I drew a little pic for you. You can find it at http://www.deviantart.com/view/21538306/

Thanks for your comments everybody. ANd yes it does help to have constructive critism. I\'ll try and beta it before posting the chapters from now on. As for slowing it down... If I\'d done that I\'d be writing it forever. It\'s just a quick over view of the happenings that could happen after the war. I was thinking about doing a preqeal/sequal thing in Heero\'s POV starting before his break down and until the end. Or something like that so everyone can find out while you\'re not there at the house with him. SO yeah, let me know kay!

And I\'ll try to get chapter four out soon hopefuly this weekend because I go back to work on monday. But it all depends on my angst muse. You\'ll have to take it up with him.

Until later,
Zim

Holy cow, that\'s so........something, it\'s quite confusing but i got over it, I can\'t wait to see what happens next. I\'ll be checking in for an update..Until We Meet again

hey, i like the idea your using but i think you need to get a beta to look over your story, spelling and so on. i also think that its coming out a bit rushed, its hard for me to get a feel for the characters. but i don\'t want to be too negative. i don\'t usually review but i think this story has potential, u just need to tidy it up a bit!

i hope this helps