rate_review Reviews

Great story!

Hey, I really like this story! Haha! Yes, I must say I really enjoyed reading the internal conflict within Vegeta. You really get to see what's going on inside his head and how confused he must be with his emotions. Good Goku/Vegeta relationship and great use of details of descriptions. I love both characters in this story and I hope that things work out. Great stuff!

A call from Bulma...eh.

I suppose next chapter they\'ll be too late to see him off or Goku will go with him?

And there will be...space smut?


Please space smut...


LOL! Just kidding. I do like fics with a plot. Just ask PixelGoddess...

Poor Goku. I look forward to your next update.

Oh, poor Goku. Such a wonderfully sad emotional chapter without being overdone. I love how you showed how he felt rather than told us. And the little details like the annoying curtain were perfect. Keep up the spectacular work. (And don\'t worry, that wasn\'t the end of Quest - I even went back and added a note to that effect just for you. *g*)

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Well done!

I can see why it was such a challenge to write this chapter.
The way you portray Vegeta\'s internal conflict is almost tangeable.

I wonder what will happen when/after they part ways, assuming that happens.
Goku\'s thoughts on the current events are also very moving. He cares so much for his friend/lover.

I look forard to the next chapter. Take your time. When I first started out I tried to get my chapters out quickly,
and they were riddled with mistakes. Your writing is very encouraging to me and I look forward to reading any more
stories you write.

if you were writing your own story with your own characters you would be less subject to ridicule. if you\'re queer you\'re queer.

LOVE SHOOK MY HEART is great compendium of utterly lesbian fiction. vegeta and goku are not gay...theyaren\'teven real. you make yourself look much the fool.

Ah - you are a success! You\'ve gotten your first idiot review. *g*

I find myself totally bewildered here - but that is a good thing. I feel bad for both Goku and Vegeta. I wonder what Vegeta is so afraid of happening that he would run away? He has never struck me as someone to run from a problem. Goku seems to understand Vegeta better than the prince understands himself.

This is hurting me! Damn it Vegeta you\'re so stubborn!