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ok..... update soon

EXCELLENT!!!! OMG what a chappie! if you would\'ve split that into two i would\'ve killed you...well not really but you know what i mean, that was EXCELLENT your best one yet... i suppose Ray could always drop out of school so they could be together? go to a school somewhere else? oh i dont know... but they\'re so good together...
update as soon as you can im addicted and it keeps getting better and better!
Liah xx

Loved the chappie!! =) And I\'m so glad you updated so fast =)=)=)=) Reaaallyy impressed me!
See ya soon!

This is a great story. Glad Parker didn\'\'t go all the way. He\'s a fucked up kid. Hope he gets it. Hope Voltaire goes down and Tala goes free. What exactly is Tala charged for though? I don\'t recall reading the reason. As for names, I think the reader who suggested My Professor, my love, is a really great one. I was thinking that myself, or close to it. Lol.
Other than that, I was thinking, Forbidden love, The Trials of love, Last thing on my mind, This heart will love again (thinking Kai\'s pov here, with Tala cheating.) Will see if I can think of more. Looking forward to the next part.

OH MY GOSH!! How could you end it there?! I\'ve been waiting for some KaixRei smut for soooooooo long and you end it there!
But I still love it! =) You\'re the best!! Please update soon, I would be very happy if you would update it before monday. =)
But I can always wait a bit longer! Love ya, bye.

nice, i like . update soon

Eeeee!! That was shmexy! And sweet! And angsty! Absolutely wonderful. Keep up the fantastic work- you\'re doing an absolutely great job with Kai and Rei\'s relationship! You\'re making it so natural <3
Really, really well done. I\'m loving it.

And Kai and Rei\'s making out scene was teh shmex!

Oh...wow. That was. That was the last chapter x100.

Even hotter, even sweeter, even sadder and even more development.

Absolutely fantastic. And the title is great!!

This is a bloody great story. Man, talk about intense. What an ass that Parker is. Hope he doesn\'t hurt Ray or Tyson again. Hope Tala gets off as well. Poor guy. Looking forward to the next part.

Another excellent chappie!! You really should consider being an author, your so good at these fics!!! And i have no idea idea whats up with Kai... too weird.... anyway, is this micheal the one who attacked him on the field i got a tad confused lol

Liah xx