rate_review Reviews

I MUST READ MORE!!!!!!!!!
This is just sooooo great! Please write more KaixRay action, it\'s so good!
You must update ASAP! Promise! I wont leave this chair until you do.
Until next time, byedibye! Love ya!

I love it keep it going.
I like the way you are playing with Kai and Rei.
Please update soon.
Foxxy.^_*

Great chappie. I loved it! Poor Rei, hope he\'s gonna be okay. And Kai is an idiot. Please update soon. Adios.

YAY!! And thus the wheels of fate kick into gear, brining forth wonderful, glorious shonen ai. ^_^ Great work.

well this is ranked second in the many fics i read lol
innocent dance is my fav, but second is pretty good compaired to how many i read.
love this chapter! who does like needles?!
and i don\'t blame kai for acting that way. he\'s not supposed to have relationships with his students...
there are other reasons of course...

wow that was a good fic and yes it did remind me quite a lot of Innocent Dance. I suppose your grammer could be a tad better (not that my grammer is any better) but other than that I don\'t have any complaints. I like where the storyline seems to be headed and I like the fact that you\'re not rushing things. I also like your portrayal of the relationship between Tala and Kai, it\'s very realistic. Keep up the great work and update soon.

Oh. My. God.

I *adore* this story so much! Rei is so adorable, but not so much where he\'s out of character or a total pushover. I love how he has these flaming feelingd for Kai, and even if none of those feelings are returned, he doesn\'t go into a suicidal rampage X_x Kai\'s depiction is also quite mysterious, as much to the readers as he is to Rei. Very enigmatic, not many people write Kai as such anymore. It\'s difficult to tell what his feelings to Rei are.

As for the story title, you should pick something not too cliche yet not too...far-fetched. Something like \"Unrequited Love\" or \"Black Stained Love\" would be BAD XD NEVER DO IT *is biased against those kinds of titles* They are way too overused and seen in the fanfiction world X_x I can\'t suggest a title, because I suck at coming up with my own as it is. But perhaps something will come to you eventually X3

I can\'t wait until your next update! ;D

when you say soon....do you mean like in a few days? me can\'t wait! finally a little affection between the two^^

Once again, too lazy to log in, but this is actually my name. Anywho, love the chapter. Poor Rei, he really needs self defense classes. I hate those guys! Please update soon. Adios.

Awwwww, poor Rei-chan! *glomps* That was a great chapter. ^_^ Yay for Kai coming to the rescue. ^_^