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for Spontaneous Combustion

by Achillona77

person dbzsuks
schedule July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your story sucks. Ive never seen such horrid shit in my life...... J/K
LMAO please finish.
person GreenEyes276
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Youve got to fishish this. I laughed my ass off!! XD
person The Chichi Slaughter House
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*is confused yet amused*
person Dragonheart287
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now that was an interesting one. It may sound strange but I\'ve never really read a ChiChi VS Vegeta thing, maybe I\'m not looking hard enough or something. I can certainly see it happening.

I think my favourite part had to be the ending though. Those last two lines may have had little or nothing to do with the plot but they still made my day ^_^

Well done on this one Anz.
person chayron
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It’s really funny: Vegeta and Chichi fighting over Goku and leaving their marks on him. And Chichi seems to be holding on Goku with her toes and teeth, and, as usual, she is trying to keep him tied to her with lots of food. Though, at the same time she manages to represent feministic outlook: “‘That’s right, blame the woman, spineless worm!’ Chichi thought…”

This: “Here he was the Prince of all Saiyans, the Crown Jewel of his race, stuck. Stuck in the worst place all males hate to be stuck in: the health and beauty aids section....” And this: “Well, well, well! If it isn’t the crowned prince of nothing! What’s the matter Vegeta? Got your period?!” Chichi sneered.” …a wonderful parody of daily routine.

And at least now I know what’s wrong with Goku’s taste for clothes… Damn…a simple milliner… Should have figured out myself...

And yes – kill Hercule! Kill him! Chichi and Vegeta unite! Hey…and what would come out if Vegeta fused with Chichi?

Aw…Goku had so much fun with Mr. Oozaru… Can Goku\'s play with his friend be a bit more explicit next time? Please? Pretty please?

And…glad you like my stories ^_~

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