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August 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
very well written. Not actually 'fluff' in my mind, but definitely not a tragedy. I would like to see it continue. Find out those consequences, both good and bad, that Roy was talking of. I think it could make an interesting first chapter.
Best of luck.
Best of luck.
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June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was so sweet! Passonate slow and caring! I love it! It made me all mushy inside litterally and figurativly!
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September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw, that was sweet. ;] I really liked this story; thanks for writing it.
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August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*cluthces chest over heart* Oh my....that was some steamy writing! It was so ... realistic. The little details, like the eyelashes against the neck when Roy kisses Ed. All of that makes this one of the best one-shots that I\'ve read. Beautiful!
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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was so sad in the begining but it was hot in the end. Great job!!!!
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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was really quite adorable, but I think it needs at least one follow-up chapter to be truly complete. ;)
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August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is great ^_^ I really like the emotional background to it and the fact that it\'s not just pure PWP. Also, it\'s great that Roy just doesn\'t jump and take advantage of him. I enjoyed the descriptive writing style of this and really loved the smut scene. You did an excellent job! Hope to see more Ed/Roy fanfictions from you ^_~
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August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sweet and poignant. I wasn\'t sure what to expect, exactly, just from the summary, so I was pleasantly surprised to find a sweetly romantic fluff-ball inside. ^_^ Had to read it three times before I finally reviews. **laughs** Even now, I know I haven\'t managed to convey exactly how much I enjoyed reading this fic.
^_^x
Chiruken
^_^x
Chiruken
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August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, if you ask me!!!
( > .^)
Character depiction was apt (especially Roy Mustang, and the way Ed effects him), the FLUFF was just enough to make you fee;l warm. Not the oft seen SWEET-enough-to-jellify-hell-three-times-over Fluff.
I really liked \"Offerings.\"
Hope you\'ll put up your next fic soon, \'cos I\'m definitely going to read it!!!XD
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( > .^)
Character depiction was apt (especially Roy Mustang, and the way Ed effects him), the FLUFF was just enough to make you fee;l warm. Not the oft seen SWEET-enough-to-jellify-hell-three-times-over Fluff.
I really liked \"Offerings.\"
Hope you\'ll put up your next fic soon, \'cos I\'m definitely going to read it!!!XD
*wink* nB