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February 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, these few stories have been amazing. It's really hot and painful at the same time. The relationship seemed..very brittle at certain points. Well, it is complicated.
There's this certain 'quiet' quality to these few stories. Everything seemed really quiet and it is as if i can only hear their breathing and soft whispers.
I do hope that you will go on writing about them!
There's this certain 'quiet' quality to these few stories. Everything seemed really quiet and it is as if i can only hear their breathing and soft whispers.
I do hope that you will go on writing about them!
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September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve always liked your writing, and I think that this is another excellent story to add to your already brilliant collection. The first person perspective was a very interesting way to approach their relationship, and revealed a dimension to the characters that is seldom attained by other authors. Keep writing ^_^ ....so I can keep reading...