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January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*is confused* why is Kai NOT smashing heads?! especially Tala o.O loving the plot, just the OOCness on Kai part is slightly worrying.....u got some serious angst in store for us poor readers havent u *paranoid shifty eyes*
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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Kai. Maxie\'s really cute and adorable!!!! To me Rei would sort of be the one to give Kai a chance with Tyson since he\'s wiser and whatnot but either way you wrote it really good!!! Anyway hope you continue!!!!!!!!!!!!
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January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WAAAAah omg A MARBVELOUS UPDATE kEELZ-SAMA!!!!!!*BOWS* And ya dedicated this chappie to me??? that so sweet! *glomps* Yoyu really did great XD poor kai though tala ius such a jerk Your A/n at the end of this cvhapter is seriously worrying me O_O upodate when ya can pls!!!!!!!
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January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this is one of my fav fics ever!
And I was very glad to see a new chapter.
But I do think it's kinda strange that Tyson doesn't know Kai's a whore, I mean he did saw him standing under a red light in a street full of prostitutes.
But still, it's a really good fic and I wait with exitement 'till the next chapter arrives.
And I was very glad to see a new chapter.
But I do think it's kinda strange that Tyson doesn't know Kai's a whore, I mean he did saw him standing under a red light in a street full of prostitutes.
But still, it's a really good fic and I wait with exitement 'till the next chapter arrives.
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January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, great stroy, Kai/Tyson is one of my favorite pairings.
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January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a really great story. Glad to see youve updated. I love TyKa. Hope Tala doesn't get in the way. He needs laying. Lol. Keep it up. Wanna see more.
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January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ho'my it seems you've done it again, I need more of this IT IS MY LIFELINE. X_X xD
Anyways, yeah great job Keelz, keep writing. xD
Keep Smilin to thats the most important thing. =D
Anyways, yeah great job Keelz, keep writing. xD
Keep Smilin to thats the most important thing. =D
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January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey,
I almost forgot about this story, so glad you updated though! Tala is kinda mean to poor Kai, jeez he can be a real punk sometimes...I hope you can update soon cause this is an awesome story. And Spencer and Bryan as bullies just seems so natural! Catcha' later.
-Kami
I almost forgot about this story, so glad you updated though! Tala is kinda mean to poor Kai, jeez he can be a real punk sometimes...I hope you can update soon cause this is an awesome story. And Spencer and Bryan as bullies just seems so natural! Catcha' later.
-Kami
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January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. Cant wait for the next one.
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January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oooo yey you updated ^^
*giggles* i lvoed this chapter, damn Tala for wakling in then >.<
but i cant wait to see more soon ^^
Liah xx
*giggles* i lvoed this chapter, damn Tala for wakling in then >.<
but i cant wait to see more soon ^^
Liah xx