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I loved it! it's a shame that Tyson didn't get to look at the pictures! ^____^ did Kai have any tyson on them! :P heh! Anyway! the content was good, and I really love the storyline as well! I plan on doing something similar to this, but I have to get it out of ocness first! Can't wait for ur next chapter!
SW

wow that as so pro hahaha i loved it tho Rei is sort of acting like a jackass lol oh well stupid Rei he ain't that cool anyways (Kai so cool i love him lol)lol but ya Plez update soon !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

oooooooooooh! i'm sooo happy you updated!!! *hugs* i hope Kai is the one who is going to be on top..because otherwise it's just wrong!! lol >.< nice jooob!

aww, how sweet, why do i get the feeling sumthin terrible is gonna hasppen?

Hehe as you said it\'s getting even more flufier XD XD. It\'s a really nice fic very original. Continue Updating!

Sweet... its great i love this story... what happened to kai???? lol i was like \"no kai don\'t be sad\" lol but w/e its all good update soon plez

KYAAAAAAAH!!!!!!!! Keelz san thats so awesome i loved this chapter omg its getting so very interesting!!!! BTW its me Jen in case ya didnt know yet hahahahahahahahha, i have an acount here aswell. Anyways omgthank you so much for dedicating this chapter to me!!!;_; *glompsd* Gawd that lil scene by the window was os endeearing and fluffsy, update when you can i know ya busy. Oh and for lemeon well..............they aint so very hard ta write lol you just need to write from the heart i guess that helps with me^^ If ya want you could read through mine for inspiration maybe, they are however under my alternate old acound Tykaloverbyheart and they are called showery fun and falling for the first time. Hey will you read my story the Forbidden and tell me what you think of it so far??? Oh and do you have an account on ff.net aswell? I have^^ If ya do let me know i wanna add ya to my watch list then!

*Jen*

Oh My... Tyson\'s completely obsessed... this is not good news...
well i dno, maybe kai will back out of the \'career\' he\'s in, beat Tala up etc ^_^ sounds like fun!
Anyway... i really like this story! i hope you cont soon plz!
Liah xx

kool, really kool i really like it! lol

Yay. Another great chapter. Keep it up. Finally some romance. I wonder what Kai\'s first kiss was with then and what happened. Is that gonna be explained? Can\'t wait to see the next chapter.