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hi i love this story chapter three was awesome i cant wait to read the next chapter

That was... -drools an excessive amount into a drool bucket- I worship yooou! I love Roy/Hughes to death and I love that doujinshi to death! The fact that your turning it into fanfiction form is astounding. I didn't know that artist had more then one out... please tell me where you got them from. And please write another chapter! I'll write you four reviews!

YEAYness, I've read the doujin though I can only understand it from the picture, but the way you continue the scene, it was ike the missing or the deleted part of the story.

I'm just feel sorry for Gracia, and I just hope it doesn't end in tragedy, but one must expect for it to eventually happen. T_T

Hope to read the next chapter, more power to you. ^_^ \m/

Chapter 4 please!!!! ^_^

You know why i think writtian porn is better than graphic porn? Becuase it lets the mind wander farther than any picture could... The Maes x Roy story raises the "brain porn" level to defcon 10000. Holy Shit the graphic detail in this story is enough to make Michel Jackson stop....doing what he does.... but anyway the way Trin puts her soul in her pen... so to speak... and writes these orgasmic stories is breathtaking. I would have to say that the Maes x Roy story forte's her note, my mind went wild (for a strait guy) it actually made me see more sweat, saliva, and that man fluid... better than any hustler, penthouse, or playboy letter could ever muster. Without a doubt i would surely reccomend this story for any anime lover, and give it a solid 5 out of 5 and my highest reccomendation. Thank you and Trin.....Keep it up into the next chapter.

Since you're once again holding the next chapter randsome, and because i'll never hear the end of it if i don't review, i'm reviewing. I could kind of tell that this chapter was rushed because everything seemed kind of off from how much effort you usually put into it; because other than the occasional spelling error your work always has a lot of good emphasis and detail without dragging things out beyond the point of no return. and we all make spelling errors anyways. but i still enjoyed it all the same, since like stated before, you got hughes' remorse for what he had done across properly. i mean after all, hughes is the family man of the century. i wish my daddy was like him. <3 so keep up the good work and stop making all of us poor little fans review. they might be shy! D: but otherwise, go you!

Luffs
~Ki-chan

I enjoyed this chapter. The confusion and conflicts in Hughes mind' (and life) between his love of Gracia and Roy were very well done. 8-) How he's going to resolve this (if he is even able to) is something I'm looking forward to reading.

Keep up the good work! 8-)

That was awesome. I'm seriously stunned right now; that was fucking incredible

Great story I love it keep writing!!!

Whoo! Guess what Trin? It's me, your super duper stalker Ki-chan! And since in your update you said that you were threatening to hold back any continuation of your fic until you got some more reviews i figured, well, why not review? So here's my take! ^3^ I liked how you still tried to stay fairly true to the character's personalities, some people just skip that and head straight to the smut. I also like how you don't kind of go off on ranty details of everything when you write love scenes too, because that often kind of ruins the depth of it because you lose attention. So far i think you're doing good Trin-Trin, so keep up the good work! Just don't overthink things too much and keep true to your style is my only advice!
~From the super duper Ki-chan, your super duper stalker fan! <3