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November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked this little ficcy. I was short, intense, and to the point. I liked how you used the other g-boys, no matter how small the parts. Supporting characters never get as much limelight as the stars do anyway. It\'s rare I see a Relena-centric fic, beyond my own, and I find it refreshing. And I understand the writer\'s block all too well. It\'s taken me up to six months to update a story sometimes. All-in-all I liked how you wrote this fic. It had a clear meaning, straight-forward plot and, in the end, a semi-happy ending. ^_^ The biggest, and only really, flaw is the spelling and grammer. It\'s not horrible, so don\'t take too much offense. It couild use a good beta maybe. One of the most notable things for me was the wrong spellings for different words..i.e.: \'their\' and \'there\' and \'they\'re\'. Again, I must say I like this ficcy and am looking forward to reading more of your stories. ^_^ ~NekuYasha