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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was amazing, one of the only Spencer/Bryan fics ever. You did an awesome job of first person narrative and kept it believable. Their personalities were kept in character and it gave a good idea into the way Bryan thought. There were mistakes here and there, normal ones like "feeling" whereas you wrote it as "felling" but nothing that was too serious. The ending was great, the part about group-therapy and the scars something that I often wondered about in teh series if that was one thing they'd have or have to go through. You put it nicely into words ^^
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November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww...-loved it- That was so cute. -giggles- Loved the ending. -nods- Great story. Ciao. -Chibid
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November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME!
That was absolutely amazingly well written! I loved the whole first and second person thing to, with all the Me-You perspective thing. It\'s so hard to write like that, well ... I think so anyway... but you did it so well! There were a few typos, little ones... like a where instead of a were, breathe instead of breath, but obviously typos so nothing to really worry about.
\"We now suffered through group therapy together.\" That made me laugh, honestly, I can SO imagine Bryan saying something like that.
Anyway, well done. Like way really super well done. lol. I\'m in a major Bryan phase at the moment, so this was a really really welcome fic.
~studio
That was absolutely amazingly well written! I loved the whole first and second person thing to, with all the Me-You perspective thing. It\'s so hard to write like that, well ... I think so anyway... but you did it so well! There were a few typos, little ones... like a where instead of a were, breathe instead of breath, but obviously typos so nothing to really worry about.
\"We now suffered through group therapy together.\" That made me laugh, honestly, I can SO imagine Bryan saying something like that.
Anyway, well done. Like way really super well done. lol. I\'m in a major Bryan phase at the moment, so this was a really really welcome fic.
~studio
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November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww! It was so cute!!! Great work, I want to read more like that! ^_^