rate_review Reviews

Nice story. I hope you continue it, I'll definitely be checking back for updates:)

eek... i hope someone found her... gahhhh... -_-"... great job so far and plz update soon ^^ was this after the war?

I dont usually read OC storys, but yours caught my eye with the summery. First thing through my head: Oh. My. God. My names in here! Sweet! And then I read it.

I really like your work, I'm helplessly captured by your plot, and I cant help noticing some similaritys in here.

1) My eyes are hazel.
2) My hair is brown (well, before I dyed it black a couple of months ago)
3) I kinda act like her in certian aspects, like If someone's bugging me and wont let someting go, I tend to pitch a fit.

I cant wait for more, but I might miss it seeing as I'm not on aff all that often. Please please PLEASE e-mail me or something when you update? Please? I really dont want to miss the next chappie, really.

-Erin

(Ps: How old is Erin? I cant remember, and I dun wanna go back because my compy is really slow. did you even mention that? I dun remember. ><)

O_O oooookkkkkkk, you realy need to cut down on the cafine. now onto the review
it's a good adition to an interesting start, but you need to put more of a hook in it.
i'm not saying it's bad, but you could have put more into it.
it did add to the appeal of the first chapter though.
i'm being crittical because i need a good betta writer, and you seem to
have a passion for it. Thats right, YOU WON. e-mail me so i can send you the advanced copies of the next
few chapters. you arnt going to be hanging like the others anymore. hahahahahah
(gives the piece out sign) (mutters that you have to be the wirdest person i have ever known)
hahahahaha

been a long time since i heard those names. it's a good stat to a seemingly interesting storry. btw, i'll updadte my storry as soon as you review again, sometimes three times a night if i get enough.