rate_review Reviews

hmmmmmm.... I think i like the writing style of the prolouge and chapter 1 better. They give more detail as to what\'s going on. the last two chapters kind of confused me. when did they get injured? why are they grown up? why is there a war if it ended a year ago?

don\'t sweat it though i like the idea very original keep up the good work and good luck
----Courtney

seems pretty interesting, i hope you update soon, and if you have this story on ff.net i really apresiate, i have acount over there, so i cqan now the updates. does Quatre\'s clone is a girl?

continue it.

see you