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for A New Kind of Game.

by shinigamitenshi

schedule December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You did a great job..LOL..sorry, it was a little funny..they're just too innocent!
person KamiaKotai
schedule September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey,

I just knew that it was Yuriy and Boris. The moment he said boys were snogging they came to mind. You should write a piece about them and when Kai found them. This was a good piece, all their innocent ways and such. ^.^ Great job. Catcha' later.

-Kami
person Kiotana
schedule July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful innocents! Sweet and naughty mixed well here^^
So good! Just like a first time only you know a little more than 8/9 year olds XD
person caberwolf
schedule June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sex sounds yucky. Heh that was my favorite line! it contradicts everything they've done together in all your other stories. Yes I've read this twice. But its really cute! Cant wait for more! have you considered writing an mpreg at all?
person Katbites
schedule June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awww. That was actually really sweet. And I know what you mean, about the actually having sex part.
person TornBloodyFaith
schedule June 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*dances around a bon fire*

Shouta! Shouta! Shouta!

SHOUTA! XD

o.o I sound like a pervert...but damnit it was too cute not to love!

This was really really great *grin* I had an idea sort of the same lines only different goin on in my head. Started writing, but then wondered if I was taking my perversions a little too far...*grins* guess not!

*continues to dance and chant*
schedule June 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I dunno, I found it cute! As this is your first shota, I can firmly declare that you could write nearly ANYTHING and EVERYTHING and make it so yummy!!! Good Job! Whoever think this may be sick, whatever. Go to hell.
schedule June 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, how cute!!! ^___^
One will never read such cute little shota fics in German (my mothertongue) or they'll kill the author for uploading children's pornography -.-u
Anyhow^^ Cute, little fic!! *hugs chibi-Kai, chibi-Rei and you* ^____^
Kepp writing!

BeyBye!

R-chan ^.^
aka Hoshisaki
person Inuyasha_is_mine
schedule June 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hmm very interesting indeed tho im not a huge fan of lil kid on lil kid action i was intrigued..very funny as well to read both thurr reactions to the situation at hand..good job ^^..
--ruby

woot 1st haha :D *i think xD*

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