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for Falling Stars

by Zoshia

person Bobobo
schedule May 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*sniffs once* not... gonna... *sniffs a second time* its not gonna happen.... *bursts into tears* awwww poor duo... at least it wasn't as bad as it could have been... and the way you treat your characters you know i was certainly expecting something... awful to say the least, this was amazing, ultimate even. Hot sex and great characters, with a lot of angsty goodness.

P.S. i love how you incorporated their gundam names! i didn't even think they'd be mentioned..
person Dragon7
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
person Sephanie
schedule February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey I just noticed a little problem on your discription it says M/F then right beside it you have YAOI UM Yaoi means Boy on Boy action not girl on boy it conufess me? I have read it and so far it seems like its all about boys you might want to change it. Or not if you like confusing people go right a head but I thought I would point that out to yeah. I hope this is still a Yaoi cause I don't like Het much or at all haha. Anyways the story is good just might want to change your errors in the discription thats all byebye

Duo Maxwell The First the middle and the last!
person WedsLem
schedule February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness i missed these boys!!!!
This was a fantasic update.. i love getting to know them all better. Duo is freekin adorable and i love there whole little trio-chemistry. Also, Amazing way to incorporate the Gundam names! Very clever... i'm impressed...
can''t wait for more! ^.^
schedule January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Kick ass, keep it up. I'm really interested in this story.
person anonymous
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
showing good imagination and well written hope to read more soon.
person sky
schedule September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great stuff
person Anya
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mmmmm, sleepy Duo is always CUTE!! I loved the lemon part - it was very well-written, and I love it how you portray Wu's and Q's personalities. But the little icky feeling wanting Waffers too sleep with Duo-bear is still lurking somewhere out-there. *grins*
Hope Duo-bear won’t suffer too much, and that his meeting with Hee-chan would be soon, too,
Please update soon,
Huggles
person Sephanie
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More more more more more more please it is soooooo good :( It makes me feel so sad but it is so good please please update soonnnnn PLEASE hehe
person skyryuu
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
eh...overall, i'm liking the story. very much so, yes. and eager to see another chapter.

one note to you and ALL authors out there. the words 'then' and 'than' and their usage.
example 1: "Quatre went somewhere, thEn he went somewhere else" (thEn- afterwards, later)
example 2: "Mike's skateboard looked better thAn steve's own" (thAn-comparative word)

keep up the good work. (oh yeah. im an empath myself)

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