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by milky

schedule January 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh my god oh my god oh my god! LOVED IT!!! I love your writing style and the way you spin a tale, very well done all around!!
person Junglebunny
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful. I hope you won. It was a sexual diction dessert.
person TrulyWished
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was F***ing awesome! So damn funny and sweet.
person ibshafer
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, that was beautiful and funny and incredibly hot! You always manage to juggle all those particular balls so, so well. For which I am eternally grateful!

I'm sure that was intended as a one-shot, but might there be a 2ns chapter lurking in the back portion of your brain somewhere? I'd love to see how they handle the ... rest of it...

person Sliefoxx
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"The mouth thing, get cracking."

That line had me rolling! Oh, I just loved the whole thing though! AND you managed to slip some Edward angst in there ... and Alfonse's inner turmoil ... this was just all so well done. :D

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