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for Lost Heaven

by Twylight

person Safir84
schedule April 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw, this is good, I really like it. The beginning is very promising, indeed, hehe! Okay, so I feel like I should tell you that I haven't read A Price to Pay yet, but I'll hopefully do that someday at least, (in the future, of course), hehe!

Coz you see at the moment I am completely heels over in love with Ed/Enyv, and that said pairing (which this story contains), I'm currently reading all the fics I can find, so that's my no:1 priority as you can probably understand!

And now on with the review, eh! Because I haven't read the prequel yet, I can't and I don't understand fully what has happen earlier but that will not stop me! Btw, what's up with Dante calling Ed darling in the first chapter, eh?!

Anyway, I think the plot is rather brilliant, Ed with amnesia, now that's an awesome idea, and he's back in Amestris as well, even better, I salute you!
And the portrayal of the charcters are really awesome too, especially Envy and Ed, your dead on, that's all I can say, really! The interaction between said pairing was awesome as well as the one with Greed, it was totally priceless.

Now on with smut even if it's N/C, normally I'm not so much into rape fics but I must say I love Envy and Ed so much it kinda makes it all worth it, if you know what I mean, hehe!

The fic is also very well written, which I really like! Please say you'll continue writing on this fic, cuz I want to read more, and if so update real soon...





person Anna
schedule August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Still no new chappy? Wakie wakie sleepy head! You have a great story to continue!
person Anna
schedule August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Looks around* no new chappy? I want new chappy!!!
person Daniela
schedule August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you decided to continue the story. you writte really good. I can't wait to see what happens next. udpate soon
person michelle
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
there is suppose to be more movies but i don't know if it is true, but *SPOILER ALERT: roy does taboo and brings hughes back to life. don't think envy ever comes back though. i feel bad for roy, ed is going to remember him
person Anna
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! Luv you!! Thanks for this awesome chapter!! You can count with my review after each and every chapter you post!!
person Midori Bond
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, my God!!!! Was that guy who I think it was?? I wanna know! I have to know!

Oh yeah, just wanted to let you know, I'm really getting a kick out of your fics. I hope you update soon!

Midori
person michelle
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
not the first movie. another one. besides SPOILER ALERT* ed is suppose to marry winry and get his arm and leg back* i can't wait to see roy's reaction
person Anna
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOOOOOOVE YOU!!!!! Arigato arigato arigato arigato!!! I knew you couldn't leave it like that! The chapter is sooo cool by the way, Ed with amnesia,great idea!

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