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for Why am I so Small?

by Petrez

schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This fic is quite an odd one... I really don't know what to say since in the summary you clearly stated that it was an "attempt" at a humor fic so I can't quite go there... Alright I got it!! One Heero is only half Asian. Two Although Wufei is a full asian there are several instances in which they are actually quite tall. I don't know if you are one of those authors that hate it when others try to give them advice and will probably take this review as a flame; it's not.

There were a few good things in your story that I agreed to totally like hating Relena. (May that pink witch burn in an eternal purgatory.)

Anyway back to the review. I think you have great potential to be a good author all you have to really do is preservere.
person Anon
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Haha, this is hilarious/

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