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by rainbow21

person Keena
schedule February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
keep going. I love this type of story... and none of the ones i'v read are finished... Im going to go insane. Just keep going
person Arsinen
schedule January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Heh how interesting I just read the first chapter I'll read the rest in a minute but just one thing that is bothering me to no hell and it's how you spell Rei/Ray I don't know how you are doing it spelling it like Rai because that's Lee's name in the original Japanese episodes and sometimes it gets confusing. But otherwise it's very good. XD
person Arsinen
schedule January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OKay just rad a few more chapters and it's a really good fic although you should reread your chapters because all throughout there is spelling and grammar mistakes. Or you could do the easy thing and get a beta to read over your stuff and fix it. XD Otherwise it's freaking awesome! Nice Lemon by the way. XD poor Rei and Kai such feelings can be very frustrating anywyas keep up the good work. XD
person hoshicat
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i hope they patch things up!!!! otherwise the entire time their feelings would have been in vain!! update soon!! ~Hoshicat ^_^
person hoshicat
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awww i cant beleive the connection!!!! i realy loved this chapter and love the rate at which you are updating! ~Hoshicat ^_^
person Shin Rigel
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sweeeeeeet ;w;
person hoshicat
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awww great chapter!!!! i cant wait for the next one!!! please update soon!!!! ~~Hoshicat ^_^
person hoshicat
schedule January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awwww i hope kai chooses rai!!!!! really good chapter update soon!!! ~Hoshicat ^_^
person anime_lover
schedule January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
f*cking great! i love it!
keep updating.. :D
person hoshicat
schedule January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awwwww i cant wait for the next chapter and im glad their both taking a step in the right direction! ~Hoshicat ^_^

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