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January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was really dark and beautiful, I liked it! Good job!
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January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooh! Dark! I luffs it! ^__^ This is a really nice companion piece to your other story. Great alternate ending. The comments about the cycle of love & pain, rules & regulations, precise punishments was wonderful. Very introspective. The guilt would drive Ed to insanity & the only way to survive it would be to feel as if he was being punished for it.