rate_review Reviews

This is wonderful....Yet so brutal and deadly I wish to know the song you have for this or is it a poem. Aswell As I wish Vegeta wouldnt have done that [[growls at vegeta]] He should not have killed goku....Ohwell it was awesome congrats

The descriptions of actions, scenery, emotions and observations...this gave the first segment a 3D feeling...I see a lot of stories/one shots that describe any one of these four things well, but never all four!

It stalked me on little cat’s paws. MWuahahahahahah, I loved this...

and this...I know mine are not so opaque as I would like them to be. Yes, Vegeta would very much NOT like to be an open book!

*DROOLS* Each touch becomes a caress of fire, his scent and taste dizzy my senses.


Eeeee...and then comes the part that kept me from reading this for so long. GAH! WHY?! (I think Hoshi has it right).

This was an amazing read. Well done c_v.

Whoa... That was... intense. and unexpected. The poigniancy of the action was touching, the ruthlessness of Vegeta using Kakarott's one true weakness to finally kill him was cold, calculated, and completely unexpected. I am completely blown away by this fic--I'm still reeling. It's as though Vegeta thought rather than try to live in happiness, which is not a true desire or in-character thing, even though he's come to love the stupid third-class, He'll use that love to kill him, and so in that way appease his ego and in that one kiss, and his death, Kakarott will always be his. Very dark, again, shocking, but I loved it, c_v. ~Hoshi*